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Informing Absence for French Classes

Informing Absence for French Classes O6ORj
Hi Ma’am, My name is Pooja Kashid. I am a student from the C7 batch of French classes. I am writing this letter to inform my absence for the entire next week. I am going a family vacation to Leh & Ladakh from 16th to 24th October 2021. I have been planning this trip from the last 3 months. My family is really excited for this trip and that is why I do not want to miss the fun with my family. Since I will be staying in remote areas, I will have limited internet access. My day routine would be jammed pack during the trip hence I will not get any time to attend the classes. My apology for not attending the classes next week. However, I will make sure to take notes from one of the classmates and do study revision on my own. I hope you will approve my absence. Thank you for your support. Regards, Pooja Kashid
Hi Ma’am,

My name is
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Pooja
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Kashid
. I am a student from the C7 batch of French classes.

I am writing this letter to inform my absence for the entire
next
week.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am going a family vacation to
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Leh
&
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Ladakh
from 16th to 24th October 2021.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have been planning this trip from the last 3 months. My family is
really
excited for this trip and
that is
why I do not want to miss the fun with my family.

Since I will be staying in remote areas, I will have limited internet access.

My day routine would
be jammed
pack during the trip
hence
I will not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
any time to attend the classes. My apology for not attending the classes
next
week.
However
, I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure to take notes from one of the classmates and do study revision on my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
. I hope you will approve my absence. Thank you for your support.

Regards,

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Pooja
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Kashid
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IELTS letter Informing Absence for French Classes

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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