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Complain about treatment which you received at holiday resort

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Dear Sir Dilshod I am writing to complain about the disagreeful treatment which I had recieved at your holiday resort. Firstly the service was so slow that it took about 15 minutes to take my order, but they claimed it to be fast. Furthermore, the food was more expensive than they informed me about it. To take matters worse I was deeply offended by the behavour of the manager. He was not only impolite, but also unhelpfull. As you can imaginebI am extremely upset, I must insist on a full refund or else I shall be forced to take further action. I expect to hear from you as soon as possible. Yours faithfully. Buritoshev.
Dear Sir
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Dilshod
I am writing to complain about the
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disagreeful
treatment which I had
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recieved
at your holiday resort.
Firstly
the service was
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so
slow that it took about 15 minutes to take my order,
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but
they claimed it to be
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fast
.
Furthermore
, the food was more expensive than they informed me about it. To take matters worse I was
deeply
offended by the
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behavour
of the manager. He was not
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only
impolite,
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but
also
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unhelpfull
. As you can
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imaginebI
am
extremely
upset, I
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must
insist on a full refund or else I shall
be forced
to take
further
action. I
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expect
to hear from you as
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soon
as possible. Yours
faithfully
.
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Buritoshev
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IELTS letter Complain about treatment which you received at holiday resort

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  American English
1 paragraphs
114 words
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