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Complain aboutone learning centre

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Mr AlexI am going to complain about your learning centre which I went. Firstly, I will complain about some teachers. I studied at English, mother tongue, history and mathematics subjects 2 last year. I learned very well English and Mother tongue, but I complain history and mathematics, becouse These teachers came to lesson half an hour later. Then we couldn't get demanding knowledge. They couldn't check our tests. I attend to your learning centre 2 month, but I couldn't get knowledge that I demanded. Fortunetly, I passed exam with a good result. I will advice that you should improve history and mathematics in your learning centre. You should control these teachers. I hope that you will confirm my advice. So Your learning centre will be improved. Your faithfully Ahror
Mr
AlexI
am
going to complain about your
learning
centre
which I went.

Firstly
, I will complain about
some
teachers. I studied at English, mother tongue, history and mathematics subjects 2 last year. I learned
very
well English and Mother tongue,
but
I complain history and mathematics,
becouse
These teachers came to lesson half an hour later. Then we couldn't
get
demanding knowledge. They couldn't
check
our
tests
. I attend to your
learning
centre
2
month
,
but
I couldn't
get
knowledge that I demanded.
Fortunetly
, I passed exam with a
good
result.

I will
advice
that you should
improve
history and mathematics in your
learning
centre
. You should control these teachers.

I hope that you will confirm my advice.
So
Your
learning
centre
will be
improved
. Your
faithfully
Ahror
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