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I am sincerely glad to be the one recommending Ms. Zahra Hallajian for the master of Executive MBA at the Technical University of Munich. I am Dr. Behzad Behnam,

I am sincerely glad to be the one recommending Ms. Zahra Hallajian for the master of Executive MBA at the Technical University of Munich. I am Dr. Behzad Behnam, jQ8lM
To whom it may concern, I am sincerely glad to be the one recommending Ms. Zahra Hallajian for the master of Executive MBA at the Technical University of Munich. I am Dr. Behzad Behnam, professor of Electronic Engineering department at Karaj Azad University. I was Zahra's instructor for three years and she had three main courses with me titled Electronic II and III as well as Electronic Laboratory. During this time, I found Zahra a hard-working and self-motivated student, who did exceedingly well during the courses by participating actively in classes and projects. Also, regarding her enthusiasm for helping others and her keen sense of communication, she assisted me with organizing problem-solving classes, which were quite effective. Moreover, with the help of her English and technical knowledge, she used to keep herself up-to-date with the latest cutting-edge knowledge. On the other hand, Zahra was adept at PLC, Matlab, and C programming which turned her into a great asset for the Robotic projects the university undertook and also participated in highly competitive robotic competitions in Iran. I know Zahra to be a true leader, who always succeeded in managing the class projects, in which she managed her own group and delegated responsibility in a way so her team could always finish the project well before the deadline. She is highly analytic when it comes to problem-solving, and never failed to impress me with her unique methods in this matter. On top of all this, she is an incredibly eloquent student, who held a number of successful presentations in class, which were always standing out among the presentations of her peers. In my unbiased opinion, she possesses a powerful blend of innovative thinking, analytical skills, and leadership potential and she would be an extremely valuable addition to your graduate program. Dr. Behzah Behnam
To whom it may concern,

I am
sincerely
glad to be the one recommending Ms.
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Zahra
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Hallajian
for the master of Executive MBA at the Technical University of Munich. I am Dr.
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Behzad
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Behnam
, professor of Electronic Engineering department at
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Karaj
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Azad
University.
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I
was
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Zahra
's instructor for three
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years and
she had three main courses with me titled Electronic II and III
as well
as Electronic Laboratory.

During this time, I found
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Zahra
a
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hard
-working and self-motivated student, who did
exceedingly
well during the courses by participating
actively
in
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classes
and
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projects
.
Also
, regarding her enthusiasm for helping others and her keen sense of communication, she assisted me with organizing problem-solving
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classes
, which were quite effective.
Moreover
, with the
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help
of her English and technical knowledge, she
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used
to
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keep
herself up-to-date with the latest cutting-edge knowledge.
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,
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Zahra
was adept at PLC, Matlab, and C programming which turned her into a great asset for the Robotic
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projects
the university undertook and
also
participated in
highly
competitive robotic competitions in Iran.

I know
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Zahra
to be a true leader, who always succeeded in managing the
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class
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projects
, in which she managed her
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own
group and delegated responsibility in a way
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so
her team could always finish the
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project
well
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before
the deadline. She is
highly
analytic when it
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comes
to problem-solving, and never failed to impress me with her unique methods in this matter. On top of all this, she is an
incredibly
eloquent student, who held a number of successful presentations in
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class
, which were always standing out among the presentations of her peers.

In my unbiased opinion, she possesses a powerful blend of innovative thinking, analytical
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skills
, and leadership
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potential and
she would be an
extremely
valuable addition to your graduate program.

Dr.
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Behzah
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IELTS letter I am sincerely glad to be the one recommending Ms. Zahra Hallajian for the master of Executive MBA at the Technical University of Munich. I am Dr. Behzad Behnam,

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