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Dear Sir. I am writing this letter to apologize do not forget go to party which I forget my grandparent's birthday.

Dear Sir. I am writing this letter to apologize do not forget go to party which I forget my grandparent's birthday. g8APg
It was not his intention to cause any disruption or inconvience. Unknowingly, I forgot your birthday and I not go to party too. In tetrospect, I believe the situation resulted from my inability to control my memory. While this is by no means an excuse for my not going, knowing the cause will help me guard against future mistakes. Again, I am sorry for what forgot. I respect you greatly and think you are the best grandfather's. Please forgive me, Sir. Thanking you, Yours faithfully Lucy.
It was not his intention to cause any disruption or
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inconvience
.
Unknowingly
, I forgot your birthday and I not go to party too. In
Possible spelling mistake found.
tetrospect
, I believe the situation resulted from my inability to control my memory. While this is by no means an excuse for my not going, knowing the cause will
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help
me guard against future mistakes. Again, I am sorry for what forgot. I respect you
greatly
and
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think
you are the best grandfather's.
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Please
forgive me, Sir. Thanking you, Yours
faithfully
Lucy.
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IELTS letter Dear Sir. I am writing this letter to apologize do not forget go to party which I forget my grandparent's birthday.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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