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motivation letter for scholarship

motivation letter for scholarship 9Y6K3

I am highly excited for this program that I will gain a lot from. I am expecting to get deeper knowledge in the field of management. I believe that my studies will enable me to develop my critical understanding of current developments and issues in the practice of management, to get more skills in critical analysis and interpretation of situations and information about the globalized organizations as much as I would like to gain the ability of analyzing business and human resource situations in the workplace. Last but not least, I am expecting to gain the practical skills that would enable me to act efficiently and effectively in the workplace and play a beneficial role in society. I intend to be very committed to my studies and set learning and achieving excellent academic grades as a priority to achieve great success with my thesis and be a great role model.

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 committed to my studies and set learning and achieving excellent academic grades as a priority to achieve great success with my thesis and be a great role model. 