Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Informal letter about modern technology such as computer

Informal letter about modern technology such as computer Kwmyw

Dear SaraThank you for your letter, it was great to hear from your again! Well, I'll try to answer your questions. No doubt computers have made our lives easier and more exciting. We need n't go to libraries as we can find almost all information on the Net. Moreover, computers help to us to relax although a number of people feel that they're rather addictive. As for me, I'm happy that I've got a computer. It helps me with my projects and I also use educational programmes. Of course I do play computer games but not very often. Anyway, write back soon and tell me about your holiday. Did you enjoy it? What interesting places did you visit? Did you make any new friends? I'd better go now as I have to feed my kitten. Best wishes. Lucy Brown

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.MarathonMarathaSarawakMarathons
SaraThank
 you for your letter, it was great to hear from your again! Well, I'll try to answer your questions. No doubt computers have made our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 easier and more exciting. We Please check whether the space between 'need' and 'n't' is correct.needn't
need n't
 go to libraries as we can find almost all information on the Net. Moreover
, computers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to us to relax although a number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 feel that they're rather
 addictive. As for me, I'm happy that I've This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a computer. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 me with my projects and I also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 educational Possible spelling mistake. 'programmes' is British English.programs
programmes
. Of The comma is probably missing here: "course, I".course, I
course I
 do play computer games This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
. Anyway, write back This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me about your holiday. Did you enjoy it? What interesting places did you visit? Did you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 any new friends? I'd better go This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 as I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 feed my kitten. Best wishes. Lucy Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphBrown.Brown!Brown?Brown:Brown,Brown;
Brown