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Informal letter about friend as an answer letter for Ann's

Informal letter about friend as an answer letter for Ann's WnOG5
Dear Anna! Thanks for your letter. I hope you are happy and well. You asked me to tell about my friends. You know I am very sociable and good with people. I have got a lot of friends. They live in different parts of Uzbekistan and neighbour countries. Some years ago I joined athletics club and met new friends. My all friends similar to me. They are Republic champions that is why they are clever and very strong. I want to tell about them. They are Dilafruz and Ugiloy. Dilafruz is tall and thin. She has got long, blond hair. She has got big, blue eyes. She has been in athletics club for 4 years, that is why she is very strong, but on the other hand is really funny and always makes us laugh. And finaly, Ugiloy is very beatiful, kind and clever girl. She has dark, short hair and not big black eyes. She is tall and thin. Some people say she look likes me. Ugiloy is going to become lawer. We often spend free time together. When we have some free time we often go somewhere. For example we go to Samarkand on summer holiday. Samarkand is a very beatiful place and old city in Uzbekistan. And famous for juwelery and bread. There we met new American people. They are from Scotland, but they live in Canada. They are friendly and nice. Also I want to visit Canada from my youth time. Right now I need to go and get ready for my athletics lesson. When you send next email don`t forget to send me a picture of you and your friends. Love Durdona
Dear Anna!

Thanks for your letter. I hope you are happy and well. You asked me to
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tell
about my friends.

You know I am
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very
sociable and
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good
with
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people
. I have
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got
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a lot of
friends. They
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live
in
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different
parts of Uzbekistan and
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neighbour
countries.
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Some
years ago I
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joined
athletics club and met new friends. My all friends similar to me. They are Republic champions
that is
why they are clever and
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very
strong. I want to
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tell
about them. They are
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Dilafruz
and
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Ugiloy
.
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Dilafruz
is tall and thin. She has
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got
long, blond hair. She has
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got
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big
, blue eyes.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
She
has been in athletics club for 4 years,
that is
why she is
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very
strong,
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but
on the other hand
is
really
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funny
and always
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makes
us laugh.

And
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finaly
,
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Ugiloy
is
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very
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beatiful
, kind and clever girl. She has dark, short hair and not
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big
black eyes. She is tall and thin.
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Some
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people
say she
The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "looks", "looked".
look
likes me.
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Ugiloy
is going to become
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lawer
. We
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often
spend free time together.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
we have
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some
free time we
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often
go somewhere. For
The comma is probably missing here: "example, we".
example we
go to Samarkand on summer holiday. Samarkand is a
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very
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beatiful
place and
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old
city in Uzbekistan. And
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famous
for
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juwelery
and bread. There we met new American
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people
. They are from Scotland,
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but
they
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live
in Canada. They are friendly and nice.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
I want to visit Canada from my youth time.

Right
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now
I need to go and
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get
ready for my athletics lesson. When you
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send
next
email
You used an accent character instead of an apostrophe. Please use either "don't" or "don’t".
don`t
forget to
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send
me a picture of you and your friends.

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Love


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Durdona
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IELTS letter Informal letter about friend as an answer letter for Ann's

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
276 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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