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inform bank manager in letter about the fact that you cannot go to an agreed meeting. you should cover following: inform and apologize describe the reason for your absence propose new time

inform bank manager in letter about the fact that you cannot go to an agreed meeting. you should cover following: inform and apologize describe the reason for your absence propose new time EbwD
I have a meeting regarding home loan fixed with you on 9th April 2022. unfortunately, i shall not be able to make it on that day. i apologies for inconvenience caused because of this. My elderly aunt and uncle are arriving from Canada on the first week of April. i have to be with them for next 10 days after their arrival therefore, I have already cancelled my all appointments for next 10 days. Actually, they are here to find the best match for her daughter So, they want me to see all the arrangements for regarding that. If they find suitable mate for her than, they are also planning for grand wedding as all the family member are here. moreover, they are not much aware about this area so they are relay on me. I am really apologies not being able to meet you according to our scheduled day. But, i am hoping that we can reschedule our meeting on after 19th April 2021 at the same place we booked previous meeting at grand hotel near junction road. Thank you for considering my apologies and hope to meet you soon! Yours sincerely, Vidhi Dave
I have a meeting regarding home loan
fixed
with you on
9th April 2022
.
unfortunately
,

i
shall not be able to
make
it on that day.
i
apologies
for inconvenience caused
because of this
.

My elderly aunt and uncle are arriving from Canada on the
first
week of April.
i
have to
be with them for
next
10 days after their
arrival


therefore
, I have already cancelled my all appointments for
next
10 days. Actually, they are here to find the best match for her daughter
So
,

they want me to
see
all the arrangements for regarding that. If they find suitable mate for her than, they are
also
planning for grand wedding as all the family member are here.

moreover
, they are not much aware about this area
so
they are
relay
on me.

I am
really
apologies not being able to
meet
you according to our scheduled day.
But
,
i
am hoping that we can reschedule our meeting on after

19th April 2021 at the same place we booked previous meeting at grand hotel near junction road.

Thank you for considering my apologies and hope to
meet
you
soon
!

Yours
sincerely
,

Vidhi
Dave
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IELTS letter inform bank manager in letter about the fact that you cannot go to an agreed meeting. you should cover following: inform and apologize describe the reason for your absence propose new time

Letter
  American English
11 paragraphs
194 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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