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You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-Speaking friend. In your letter 1.Explain why you changed jobs 2. Describe your new job 3.Tell him your other news

You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-Speaking friend. In your letter 1. Explain why you changed jobs 2. Describe your new job 3. Tell him your other news R1W8

Dear Smith, Hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to tell you some fabulous news that makes me happy. The first news is that, I changed the job that I worked from 2015. You may keen to know the reason why I quite my previous job. There were some reasons, such as, their increment rate was very low and last year they apprise me only one, and the holiday, there were only one day-off in a week. But at my present office, they provide me two days holiday in a week and their increment rate is also up to the mark. I join this company with same responsibilities but my rank is higher than previous one as well as my salary. Along with my regular responsibilities, I have to look after another department named training department that, I think, will enhance my communication skill. In addition, they will provide some extra benefits for taking care of training department. Now I want to share some personal things with you. First of all, I bought a new cell phone that cost 50 thousand and it was my dream to buy high range phone. Another good news is that my younger brother got a job, who is recently graduated from university. No more today. Keep me in your prayer and give my love to your brother. Your friend hiru

Dear Smith,

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 high range phone. Another This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
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news
 is that my younger brother This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
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 a job, who is recently graduated from university.

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. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
Keep
 me in your prayer and give my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to your brother.

Your friend

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