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Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: • explain your travel plans • describe the interesting places you plan to visit • ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: • explain your travel plans • describe the interesting places you plan to visit • ask for suggestions for sightseeing options. oGk9
Dear Adam, Hope this letter find you in radiant health and the best spirit. I am planning to visit to Canada this summer as I have summer vacation. I am so excited to see you after long time. I am planning to come on month of July as is summer over there at that time. My vacation starts at mid of July and Ends on first week August so, I am thinking to plan for ten days trip. I have seen your lots of famous places picture on your social media. As I am landing on Toronto Airport therefore, I would like to see the Niagara Falls, University of Toronto, Lakeshore. I hope that you would get time to be with me in those ten days as I am new to this place. It would be great if you suggest me some places which are amaze to see in City of Toronto. Shall I take tour by local buses or cab? Could you Please, Suggest me some cheap and nice place for accommodation too. Hope to hear from you soon! Your Faithfully, Vidhi Dave
Dear Adam,

Hope this letter find you in radiant health and the best spirit. I am planning to visit to Canada this summer as I have summer vacation. I am
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excited to
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you after long time.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am planning to
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come
on month of July as is summer over there at that time. My vacation
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starts
at mid of July and Ends on
first
week August
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so
, I am thinking to plan for ten days trip. I have
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seen
your lots of
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famous
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places
picture on your social media. As I am landing on Toronto Airport
therefore
, I would like to
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see
the Niagara Falls, University of Toronto,
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Lakeshore
.

I hope that you would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
time to be with me in those ten days as I am new to this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
. It would be great if you suggest me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
places
which are amaze to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
in City of Toronto. Shall I take tour by local buses or cab? Could you
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Please
, Suggest me
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some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cheap
and nice
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
for accommodation too.

Hope to hear from you
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soon
!

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
Faithfully
,

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Vidhi
Dave

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: • explain your travel plans • describe the interesting places you plan to visit • ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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