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Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: • explain your travel plans • describe the interesting places you plan to visit • ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: • explain your travel plans • describe the interesting places you plan to visit • ask for suggestions for sightseeing options. oGk9

Dear Adam, Hope this letter find you in radiant health and the best spirit. I am planning to visit to Canada this summer as I have summer vacation. I am so excited to see you after long time. I am planning to come on month of July as is summer over there at that time. My vacation starts at mid of July and Ends on first week August so, I am thinking to plan for ten days trip. I have seen your lots of famous places picture on your social media. As I am landing on Toronto Airport therefore, I would like to see the Niagara Falls, University of Toronto, Lakeshore. I hope that you would get time to be with me in those ten days as I am new to this place. It would be great if you suggest me some places which are amaze to see in City of Toronto. Shall I take tour by local buses or cab? Could you Please, Suggest me some cheap and nice place for accommodation too. Hope to hear from you soon! Your Faithfully, Vidhi Dave

Dear Adam,

Hope this letter find you in radiant health and the best spirit. I am planning to visit to Canada this summer as I have summer vacation. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 excited to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you after long time.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am planning to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 on month of July as is summer over there at that time. My vacation This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 at mid of July and Ends on first
 week August This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, I am thinking to plan for ten days trip. I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 your lots of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
places
 picture on your social media. As I am landing on Toronto Airport therefore
, I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the Niagara Falls, University of Toronto, Possible spelling mistake found.Lake shore
Lakeshore
.

I hope that you would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 time to be with me in those ten days as I am new to this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
. It would be great if you suggest me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
places
 which are amaze to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 in City of Toronto. Shall I take tour by local buses or cab? Could you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
, Suggest me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
 and nice You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
 for accommodation too.

Hope to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
!

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
Faithfully
,

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Vidhi
 Dave