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Dear Mrs. Clinton Hope you are doing well? I apologize for the noise we made last weekend. We had a birthday party of my brother and all are relatives were in the party. Lots of girls and boys were also in the party and some of them were drunk. They played music with high volume and started dancing. I hope you will understand that when lots of people get together and partying it's hard to stop them. I apologize for that incident and i am flowers and chocolates for that. I believe you will forgive us. Also, i promise these type of things will not happen again and i will let my family members, friends and relatives know to keep volume low while partying or else we will party in some hotel. Once again, i am sorry for the disturbance we created. Your Sincerely Tally

Dear Mrs. Clinton Hope you are doing well? I apologize for the noise we made last weekend. We had a birthday party of my brother and all are relatives were in the party. Lots of girls and boys were also in the party and some of them were drunk. They played music with high volume and started dancing. I hope you will understand that when lots of people get together and partying it's hard to stop them. I apologize for that incident and i am flowers and chocolates for that. I believe you will forgive us. Also, i promise these type of things will not happen again and i will let my family members, friends and relatives know to keep volume low while partying or else we will party in some hotel. Once again, i am sorry for the disturbance we created. Your Sincerely Tally gJqO
Dear Mrs. Clinton Hope you are doing well? I apologize for the noise we made last weekend. We had a birthday party of my brother and all are relatives were in the party. Lots of girls and boys were also in the party and some of them were drunk. They played music with high volume and started dancing. I hope you will understand that when lots of people get together and partying it's hard to stop them. I apologize for that incident and i am flowers and chocolates for that. I believe you will forgive us. Also, i promise these type of things will not happen again and i will let my family members, friends and relatives know to keep volume low while partying or else we will party in some hotel. Once again, i am sorry for the disturbance we created. Your Sincerely Tally
Dear Mrs. Clinton

Hope you are doing well?

I apologize for the noise we made last weekend. We had a birthday
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of my brother and all are relatives were in the
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. Lots of girls and boys were
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am flowers and chocolates for that.
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believe you will forgive us.

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promise these type of things will not happen again and
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my family members, friends and relatives know to
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hotel.

Once again,
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am sorry for the disturbance we created.

Your
Sincerely


Tally
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IELTS letter Dear Mrs. Clinton Hope you are doing well? I apologize for the noise we made last weekend. We had a birthday party of my brother and all are relatives were in the party. Lots of girls and boys were also in the party and some of them were drunk. They played music with high volume and started dancing. I hope you will understand that when lots of people get together and partying it's hard to stop them. I apologize for that incident and i am flowers and chocolates for that. I believe you will forgive us. Also, i promise these type of things will not happen again and i will let my family members, friends and relatives know to keep volume low while partying or else we will party in some hotel. Once again, i am sorry for the disturbance we created. Your Sincerely Tally

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144 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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