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A museum near your house is looking for people to do part-time voluntary unpaid work. You would like to do some Voluntary/unpaid work at museum. Explain why you want to do. Describe your skills Give details when you are available for work.

A museum near your house is looking for people to do part-time voluntary unpaid work. You would like to do some Voluntary/unpaid work at museum. Explain why you want to do. Describe your skills Give details when you are available for work. lkL9

Hello sir, Hope you are doing well. I saw your advertisement on paper this morning regarding volunteer work at museums and I found your contact details so, I am writing you letter for further more details. I am an art student so I do have knowledge and information about this kind of historical things. I have also worked as museum guide in my last summer vacation. I do have experience about guiding people and explain them about things for instance paintings and statues. I can work at your museum as guide. I previously mention I do have experience regarding art. , also having information about drawings and paintings you have it in your art gallery. Of course, I may not aware about all of them but I can improvise myself in that area. My available days are Monday, Wednesday and Saturday from 3: 00 PM to 11: 00 PM. Hope to hear from you soon. Regards, Vidhi Dave

Hello sir,

Hope you are doing well. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 your advertisement on paper this morning regarding volunteer work at museums and I found your contact This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
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so
, I am writing you letter for further
 more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
.

I am an art student This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I do have knowledge and information about this kind of historical things. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have also
 worked as museum guide in my last summer vacation. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 do have experience about guiding This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 them about things for instance
 paintings and statues.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 can work at your museum as guide. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 previously mention I do have experience regarding art. Loose punctuation mark.apply
,
also
 having information about drawings and paintings you have it in your art gallery. Of course
, I It seems that a verb or adverb has been misspelled or is missing here.may be not awaremay have not aware
may not aware
 about all of them This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I can improvise myself in that area.

My available days are Monday, Wednesday and Saturday from 3: 00 PM to 11: 00 PM.

Hope to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Regards,

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