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Hello Sir/Madam, I am writing in connection with job advertisement posted on an Australian magazine. I understand that you need a person who can live with your family and look after your six-year-old child. Knowing the fact that this job is available only for 6 months, I will be very much interested in the same. Truth be told, due to present pandemic, I have lost my job as a day care nurse. I have previous experience as male nanny and I am an active volunteer at an old age home too. I have attached my resume for your reference. Words like patient, tidy, observant and hard working define me. I want to pursue my higher education in future, thereby I would like to prepare for my IELTS exam in my free time. Nevertheless, this is my assurance that it won't impact my duty towards this job. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Kind Regards, Manish

Hello Sir/Madam,

I am writing in connection with job advertisement posted on an Australian magazine. I understand that you need a person who can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 with your family and look after your six-year-This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 child.

Knowing the fact that this job is available This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 for 6 months, I will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much interested in the same. Truth be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
, due to present pandemic, I have lost my job as a day care nurse. I have previous experience as male Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).nanny, and
nanny and
 I am an active volunteer at an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 age home too. I have attached my resume for your reference. Words like patient, tidy, observant and This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.hard-workinghardworking
hard working
 define me.

I want to pursue my higher education Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in future
, thereby I would like to prepare for my IELTS exam in my free time. Nevertheless
, this is my assurance that it won't impact my duty towards this job.

I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Kind Regards,

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