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You received an email from the academic office at a language center where you want to study, they asked about your language levels and preferences. Thank you for your interest in our language program. From your last email, it hasn't been clear to us which courses do you want to study and when you can start learning. Also, there are various courses at different levels in our center, so it will be easier for us to suggest a course to you if you can tell us a bit more about your current language level and your preferred studying method.

You received an email from the academic office at a language center where you want to study, they asked about your language levels and preferences. Thank you for your interest in our language program. From your last email, it hasn't been clear to us which courses do you want to study and when you can start learning. Also, there are various courses at different levels in our center, so it will be easier for us to suggest a course to you if you can tell us a bit more about your current language level and your preferred studying method. Q506x
Dear Sir/Madam, I was pleased to hear your response, and I’m really sorry for the unclear email about the English course I want, so I’m writing to give you some information about my current English level, and preferred studying method as well. At the moment, I have passed the intermediate B1 certificate of CEFR - Common European Framework of Reference Languages with a score of 5. 5 overall, but I just got 4. 5 in Speaking. I feel myself that I can carry out basic conversations in a wide variety of situations, but I still often make some grammar mistakes while speaking, and my former teacher also told me that I have limited working proficiency and needed to develop my speaking speed. Therefore, I want an English communication course that can help me increase my language speaking reflexes, and I have embraced I definitely get B2 CEFR about 2 months. Could you suggest me some suitable courses for me to attend? It was great that you want to hear my preferred learning method, and I would like to share that I feel I can study languages well through watching many types of English films, which helps me learn a lot of common saying and idioms for daily English communication. Let me know what are you thinking. I hope you will respond to this comment of mine as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Jane Smith.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I was
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pleased
to hear your response, and I’m
really
sorry for the unclear email about the English course I want,
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so
I’m writing to give you
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some
information about my
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current
English level, and preferred studying method
as well
.

At the moment, I have passed the intermediate B1 certificate of CEFR
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Common European Framework of Reference Languages with a score of 5. 5
overall
,
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but
I
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just
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got
4. 5 in Speaking. I feel myself that I can carry out basic conversations in a wide variety of situations,
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but
I
still
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often
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make
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some
grammar mistakes while speaking, and my former teacher
also
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told
me that I have limited working proficiency and needed to develop my speaking speed.
Therefore
, I want an English communication course that can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me increase my language speaking reflexes, and I have embraced I definitely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
B2 CEFR about 2 months. Could you suggest me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
suitable courses for me to attend?

It was great that you want to hear my preferred learning method, and I would like to share that I feel I can study languages well through watching
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
types of English films, which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
me learn
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
common saying and idioms for daily English communication.

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Let
me know what are you thinking.

I hope you will respond to this comment of mine as
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soon
as possible.

Yours
sincerely
,

Jane Smith.
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IELTS letter You received an email from the academic office at a language center where you want to study, they asked about your language levels and preferences. Thank you for your interest in our language program. From your last email, it hasn't been clear to us which courses do you want to study and when you can start learning. Also, there are various courses at different levels in our center, so it will be easier for us to suggest a course to you if you can tell us a bit more about your current language level and your preferred studying method.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
234 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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