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The hobby you like the most.

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Hello everyone my name is Khanh Ngan, I'm from 7A9 class. And today I'm going to introduce about my hobby. I have many hobbies, but I adore watching the most. I like watching Anime which hand-drawn and computer animation originating from Japan. Because after tired times, watching anime makes me feel relaxed. Every day, at rest times, I will spend about an hour and a half watching it. But I still focus on studying, so my parents are not strictly forbidden. Watching is like a part of my life.
Hello everyone my name is
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Khanh
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, I'm from 7A9
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I adore watching the most. I like watching Anime which hand-drawn and computer animation originating from Japan.
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after tired times, watching anime
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IELTS letter The hobby you like the most.

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89 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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