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You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job nYen
Dear Paul, I am writing to let you know that I am coming to your country to study and would need your help in finding a part-time job while studying. Let me explain my situation in more detail. Recently, I got admitted to one of the most renowned universities in the world, which is Harvard for my Master's in Computer Science. My classes will begin on 25th June this year. As it is a two-year-long programme, the first year will be based on a thesis majorly and in the latter year, there will be an internship along with a placement drive on campus. Owing to the fact that it is very costly to study in such a great institution, I am looking for a part-time role besides my normal study schedule as it will help me to pay my fees and also survive in this country where the per-capita income is quite high. Could you try to look for any part-time home tutor role? I have vast experience in teaching and this would definitely pave way for tuition's opportunity. I am really ecstatic to meet you in person. Your friend, ABC
Dear Paul,

I am writing to
let
you know that I am coming to your country to study and would need your
help
in finding a part-time job while studying.

Let
me
explain
my situation in more detail. Recently, I
got
admitted to one of the most renowned universities in the world, which is Harvard for my Master's in Computer Science. My classes will
begin
on 25th June this year. As it is a two-year-long
programme
, the
first
year will
be based
on a thesis
majorly
and in the latter year, there will be an internship along with a placement drive on campus.

Owing to the fact that it is
very
costly to study in such a great institution, I am looking for a part-time role
besides
my normal study schedule as it will
help
me to pay my fees and
also
survive in this country where the
per-capita
income is quite high.

Could you try to look for any part-time home tutor role? I have vast experience in teaching and this would definitely pave way for tuition's opportunity.

I am
really
ecstatic to
meet
you in person.

Your friend,

ABC
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IELTS letter You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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