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Hi everyone! Today, I will introduce my job. When I was child, I very like engineer work because I saw they work hard in contruction site and in my house, my father hard to fix it, this is a leakage wall, it is very dangerous so it motivates me to become a engineer when I growing up. Wow, it is really great for me. And now, I can help people everywhere building houes beautiful and cost house not people. Because, when the weather is heavy rain, they will wet after they ill that dangerous. They eat leftover from gargabage. Inside, have many bacteria they don’t know it. I think it very so many so much. I also send my opion in my family. They said me that it is necessy and I should help people.
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  American English
1 paragraphs
135 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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