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answer your neighbor complaint about the noise from your house

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Dear Marlin, Hello. I'm writing this letter regarding your complaint about hearing noise from my house. Unfortunately, my kitchen plumping has big issues and I have to fix it unless a flood will destroy my house. The plumper is working every day and night to solve the problem and I hope it ended as soon as possible. Please accept my apology for these disturbing noises. I don't like to bother anybody, but I have no choice until the cause is found. Although we try to make no noises as much as possible, because of the short distance between our houses, you hear every noise very loud. Meanwhile, we can take some approach to reduce the noises. For example, if I have your work hours, we can change the fixing time and set it based on hours that you are out of the home. If you have any suggestions or ideas regards to this problem, please don't hesitate and share them with me. I will work on that. Best regards Elsa
Dear Marlin,

Hello. I'm writing this letter regarding your complaint about hearing
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noise
from my
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house
. Unfortunately, my kitchen plumping has
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big
issues and I
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have to
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fix
it unless a flood will
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destroy
my
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house
. The plumper is working every day and night to solve the problem and I hope it ended as
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soon
as possible.

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Please
accept my apology for these disturbing
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noises
. I don't like to bother anybody,
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but
I have no choice until the cause
is found
. Although we try to
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make
no
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noises
as much as possible,
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because
of the short distance between our
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houses
, you hear every
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noise
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very
loud.

Meanwhile, we can take
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some
approach to
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reduce
the
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noises
.
For example
, if I have your work hours, we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the fixing time and set it based on hours that you are out of the home.

If you have any suggestions or
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ideas
regards to this problem,
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please
don't hesitate and share them with me. I will work on that.

Best regards

Elsa

IELTS letter answer your neighbor complaint about the noise from your house

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
169 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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