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You have rented a house by a lake for the summer. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter • describe the house. • describe how you are spending your time there. • invite your friend to come and visit.

You have rented a house by a lake for the summer. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter • describe the house. • describe how you are spending your time there. • invite your friend to come and visit. nE00E
I am writing about the summer lake house that I have rented. My summer house is extraordinarily bigger and thanks to the nearby lake, I spend all my time in lake activities. I am assured you will admire this vacation, so you should come here. My villa is gigundous and it possesses major rooms and a backyard, a fabulously view of the lake. I am on holiday with my large family and Clara and Eva who are some of my best friends, that is to say, I share the home with nine people. However, everyone has private rooms so that my country house is so bigger, and also there are two empty rooms. On the other hand, a fascinating lake view has in the backyard. When I watch the sunset, I feel peaceful. I can do various activities due to the nearby lake. Firstly, while the sun dawn, I get up and I run in the forest that is beside the lake and then I swim for at least one hour. Somedays, we whip to catch fish and there are a lot of fish in the lake and all of them are delicious. I know you like lake holidays, so I think you join us. Every night, I and you can watch view lake and you are fond of it. Also, You care about your personal space a lot, so you will possess special rooms if you come. I hope you can accept my invitation. I desire you to come here. Best wishes Serina
I am writing about the summer
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lake
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house
that I have rented. My summer
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house
is
The extreme adjective for big is "huge", "massive", "colossal", "gigantic", or "giant".
extraordinarily bigger
and thanks to the nearby
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lake
, I spend all my time in
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lake
activities. I
am assured
you will admire this vacation,
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so
you should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
here.

My villa is
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gigundous
and it possesses major
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rooms
and a backyard, a
You used an adverb ('fabulously') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('view') instead of another adjective.
fabulously view
of the
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lake
. I am on holiday with my large family and Clara and Eva who are
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some
of my best friends,
that is
to say, I share the home with nine
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people
.
However
, everyone has private
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rooms
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so
that my country
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house
is
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so
bigger, and
also
there are two empty
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rooms
.
On the other hand
, a fascinating
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lake
view has in the backyard.

When I
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watch
the sunset, I feel peaceful.

I can do various activities due to the nearby
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lake
.
Firstly
, while the sun dawn, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
up and I run in the forest
that is
beside the
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lake
and then I swim for at least one hour.
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Somedays
, we whip to catch fish and there are
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a lot of
fish in the
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lake
and all of them are delicious.

I know you like
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lake
holidays,
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so
I
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think
you
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join
us. Every night, I and you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
view
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lake
and you are fond of it.
Also
, You care about your personal space a lot,
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so
you will possess special
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rooms
if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
.

I hope you can accept my invitation. I desire you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
here.

Best wishes

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Serina
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IELTS letter You have rented a house by a lake for the summer. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter • describe the house. • describe how you are spending your time there. • invite your friend to come and visit.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
253 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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