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I won the second prize in a competition at my school, so I decide to travel to your country for 2 weeks. I am wondering what the weather is like in your country, where I should go to visit and some interesting activities I can take part in there. Can you give me some information?

I won the second prize in a competition at my school, so I decide to travel to your country for 2 weeks. I am wondering what the weather is like in your country, where I should go to visit and some interesting activities I can take part in there. Can you give me some information? L3638
Dear Ann Apologies for not writing for so long because I have been overwhelmed at work recently. Congratulations, your attempts so great. And I am very expected when know you make a decision to visit to my country in next time. In terms of weather, please do not worry about it because it so fairly warm which give people permission to do anything. However, by forecast, the weather is colder than in next week hence you do not forget to bring jackets, jeans and so on which have a warm sense. Concerning some excited places, I suggest that you should go sight-seeing a number of famous local sites such as Mot Cot Pagoda in order to figure local culture out. Besides, you should participate volunteering activities with some freshman of universities. They’re unforgettable memories with you. See you soon. Please don’t hesitate if you need further information. Best wishes.
Dear Ann

Apologies for not writing for
so
long
because
I have
been overwhelmed
at work recently.

Congratulations, your attempts
so
great. And I am
very
expected
when know you
make
a decision to visit to my country in
next
time. In terms of weather,
please
do not worry about it
because
it
so
fairly
warm which give
people
permission to do anything.
However
, by forecast, the weather is colder than in
next
week
hence
you do not forget to bring jackets, jeans and
so
on which have a warm sense.

Concerning
some
excited places, I suggest that you should go sight-seeing a number of
famous
local sites such as Mot Cot Pagoda in order to figure local culture out.
Besides
, you should participate volunteering activities with
some
freshman of universities. They’re unforgettable memories with you.

See
you
soon
.
Please
don’t hesitate if you need
further
information.

Best wishes.
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IELTS letter I won the second prize in a competition at my school, so I decide to travel to your country for 2 weeks. I am wondering what the weather is like in your country, where I should go to visit and some interesting activities I can take part in there. Can you give me some information?

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