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Dear Sir, It would be great if we could schedule a conference at the Hotel Excel.

Dear Sir, It would be great if we could schedule a conference at the Hotel Excel. Eqr9L
Dear Sir, It would be great if we could schedule a conference at the Hotel Excel. The meeting will be held on 25rd December 2021 at 9 am. The participants number will not exceed 10 person so we just need a place not too large. It is the important conference to our work so make sure the wifi must be fast and all required equipment is available for us. The conference will be held within 3 hours and then we will have lunch here. Therefore, could you tell me what your best price for this is? I am looking forward to hearing from you. All the best Thien
Dear Sir,

It would be great if we could schedule a conference at the Hotel Excel. The meeting will
be held
on 25rd December 2021 at 9 am. The participants number will not exceed 10 person
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so
we
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need a place not too large. It is the
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important
conference to our work
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so
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make
sure the
Did you mean "Wi-Fi"? (This is the officially approved term by the Wi-Fi Alliance.)
wifi
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must
be
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fast
and all required equipment is available for us. The conference will
be held
within 3
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
hours and
then we will have lunch here.
Therefore
, could you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
me what your best price for this is?

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

All the best

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IELTS letter Dear Sir, It would be great if we could schedule a conference at the Hotel Excel.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
107 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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