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Write a letter to one of your colleagues has recently been appointed as the new manager of the company.

Write a letter to one of your colleagues has recently been appointed as the new manager of the company. YgPBn

Dear Susan. I am one of your colleagues. I am writing to congratulate you on your new position in our company. I know that you skills are great fit to lead the company. We are happy to have you in control and our trust with you. Under your wing, we have a feeling that the company will be responsible for some significant accomplishments. So you should always work hard. I would like to inform you that our section have some problems. Because they live far from the working place, the employees can't come at work on time and it take much money for transport. As you know our company is the best in the country. The products of it have the best quality. I request of you to organize the special bus for our section's employess. Perhaps we could meet this Sunday afternoon to discuss our options. I hope that you will come undoubtedly. I apperciate your wholehearted concern with regard to this issue in advance. You sincerelyLily.

Dear Susan. I am one of your colleagues. I am writing to congratulate you on your new position in our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 know that you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 are great fit to lead the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
. We are happy to have you in control and our trust with you. Under your wing, we have a feeling that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 will be responsible for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 significant accomplishments. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 you should always work This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
. I would like to inform you that our section have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 problems. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 far from the working place, the employees can't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 at work on time and it Did you mean "takes"?takes
take
 much money for transport. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 you know our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 is the best in the country. The products of it have the best quality. I request of you to organize the special bus for our section's Possible spelling mistake found.employeesemployers
employess
. Perhaps we could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 this Sunday afternoon to discuss our options. I hope that you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
undoubtedly
. I Possible spelling mistake found.appreciate
apperciate
 your wholehearted concern with regard to this issue in advance. You Possible spelling mistake found.sincerely Lily
sincerelyLily
. 