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You live in a small apartment building with a parking lot in back, and you often cannot find an empty parking space when you get home from work. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter Describe the situation. Explain why it bothers you. Suggest something the landlord could do to solve the problem.

You live in a small apartment building with a parking lot in back, and you often cannot find an empty parking space when you get home from work. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter Describe the situation. Explain why it bothers you. Suggest something the landlord could do to solve the problem. gGODl
Dear Mr. Rajesh, Hope all is well with you, we are also good here. I am vinoth your tenant. I am writing this letter regarding parking. I have living here for past three years, which I didn’t face any problem past decades. I have noticed next to apartment tenant were using our parking space. I want to take this issue to your notice. Recently I don’t have space to park my car in parking area, after completing my work, I could reach my home after 11. 00 pm the parking was fully occupied and recently I am parking my car to my uncle home. Recently I have brought new brand car and there is no space to park, which I have disappointed to park my car to relative home. My office time starts at 9. 00am and I could start my car at 8. 00am to reach my office, this kind of situation I need to leave my home at 7. 00am to take my car from uncle home. Take this issue to next apartment owner and talk to them about issues who are unauthorized person parking them vehicle in our area. My suggestion should appoint one security staff to take responsible and to sort out this problem. I hope you understand my problem and do the needful. Yours sincerely, Vinoth sivaji.
Dear Mr. Rajesh,

Hope all is well with you, we are
also
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good
here. I am
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vinoth
your tenant. I am writing this letter regarding
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
.
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I
have living here for past three years, which I didn’t face any problem past decades.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have noticed
next
to apartment tenant were using our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
space.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
want to take this issue to your notice.

Recently I don’t have space to park my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
area, after completing my work, I could reach my home after 11. 00 pm the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
was
fully
occupied and recently I am
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
to my uncle home.

Recently I have brought new brand
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
and there is no space to park, which I have disappointed to park my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
to relative home. My office time
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
starts
at 9. 00am and I could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
at 8. 00am to reach my office, this kind of situation I need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
my home at 7.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
00am
to take my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
from uncle home.

Take this issue to
next
apartment owner and talk to them about issues who
are unauthorized
person
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
them vehicle in our area. My suggestion should appoint one security staff to take responsible and to sort out this problem. I hope you understand my problem and do the needful.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Vinoth
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sivaji
.

IELTS letter You live in a small apartment building with a parking lot in back, and you often cannot find an empty parking space when you get home from work. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter Describe the situation. Explain why it bothers you. Suggest something the landlord could do to solve the problem.

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7 paragraphs
222 words
6.0
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