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I reduce with my friend to the trip on Monday

I reduce with my friend to the trip on Monday EwnxD
Dear Marie, First of all, I am very surprised when you come to Vietnam and ask for my recommendation for your trip when you first come to Vietnam. And I hope this information will help you. To answer your first question: Yes, I'd be happy to share with you. You want to know where to stay when you come to Vietnam. And I think you should go to a resort like Mekong Resort, located away from the center of Cao Lanh City in Dong Thap, Vietnam. This is the right place for you when you first come to Vietnam. Regarding your second question, you can do many activities. You can visit historical sites and enjoy the specialties of the Southwest region. In addition, you can also experience karaoke with other Vietnamese in the resort.  In reply to your final question: The weather of the resort at this time is quite good; Warm sunshine in the morning, light rain in the afternoon, cool in the evening. However, I recommend you bring an umbrella when going out. Furthermore, I suggest you search for resort information on online websites. All meals, accommodation and a day tour are clearly presented. I am sure that Mekong resort is perfect for you and you will enjoy your holidays there. Please contact me if you would like more information. I look forward to seeing you!  Best friend,  Khai
Dear Marie,
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, I am
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very
surprised when you
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come
to Vietnam and
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ask for
my recommendation for your trip when you
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first
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come
to Vietnam. And I hope this information will
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help
you. To answer your
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first
question: Yes, I'd be happy to share with you. You want to know where to stay when you
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come
to Vietnam. And I
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think
you should go to a
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resort
like Mekong
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Resort
, located away from the center of
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Cao
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Lanh
City in Dong
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Thap
, Vietnam. This is the right place for you when you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
first
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to Vietnam. Regarding your second question, you can do
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
activities. You can visit historical sites and enjoy the specialties of the Southwest region.
In addition
, you can
also
experience karaoke with other Vietnamese in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
resort
.  In reply to your final question: The weather of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
resort
at this time is quite
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
; Warm sunshine in the morning, light rain in the afternoon, cool in the evening.
However
, I recommend you bring an umbrella when going out.
Furthermore
, I suggest you search for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
resort
information on online websites. All meals, accommodation and a day tour are
clearly
presented. I am sure that Mekong
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
resort
is perfect for you and you will enjoy your holidays there.
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Please
contact me if you would like more information. I look forward to seeing you!  Best friend,
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Khai
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IELTS letter I reduce with my friend to the trip on Monday

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
230 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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