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I, along with my wife, had been there to celebrate our wedding anniversary.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to express my displeasure with the experience I had at your restaurant yesterday. While the Service itself was fine, there were issues with the meal we were served. I, along with my wife, had been there to celebrate our wedding anniversary. I had an entire evening planned, starting with a candle light dinner at the restaurant, followed by a cake cutting at the same venue. We were expecting our friends to join us. However, none of the above plans worked out due to the chaos created by the incorrect food served. Let me explain you the problem, my wife is a vegan and she ordered for a non diary food. When her dish was served, she double checked the ingredients with the waiter and on confirmation, she started eating it. Not only was she served with the non vegan food, but also it had seafood which she was allergic too. I had to rush her to the hospital and thus celebrated the anniversary night at the medical canteen. On enquiring, I learnt that the food which was supposed to be served to the table next to ours' was served to us. Is it possible for the restaurant to number the tables? I reckon that system would serve as a solution to the mix-up related issues. I sincerely hope you would personally look into such issues and prevent them from future occurance. Thank you for considering. Your Wellwisher, Sabari Raja A R
Dear Sir,

I am writing to express my displeasure with the experience I had at your restaurant yesterday. While the Service itself was fine, there were issues with the meal we
were served
.

I, along with my wife, had been there to celebrate our wedding anniversary.

I had an entire evening planned, starting with a candle light dinner at the restaurant, followed by a cake cutting at the same venue.

We were expecting our friends to
join
us.
However
, none of the above plans worked out due to the chaos created by the incorrect food served.

Let
me
explain
you
the problem, my wife is a
vegan and
she ordered for a non diary food.

When her dish
was served
, she double
checked
the ingredients with the waiter and on confirmation, she
started
eating it.

Not
only
was she served with the
non vegan
food,
but
also
it had seafood which she was allergic too.

I had to rush her to the hospital and
thus
celebrated the anniversary night at the medical canteen.

On
enquiring
, I
learnt
that the food which
was supposed
to
be served
to the table
next
to
ours'
was served
to us.

Is it possible for the restaurant to number the tables? I reckon that system would serve as a solution to the mix-up related issues.

I
sincerely
hope you would
personally
look into such issues and
prevent
them from future
occurance
.

Thank you for considering.

Your
Wellwisher
,

Sabari
Raja A R
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  American English
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245 words
6.0
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