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I am writing to express my interest to work at the head office of our company in New York. While the work and evnvironment at Chennai is fine,

I am writing to express my interest to work at the head office of our company in New York. While the work and evnvironment at Chennai is fine, AjrjX
Dear Sir, I am writing to you to express my displeasure with the laptop fan procured from your shop on June 3rd. While the functioning of the equipment is fine, I am facing difficulties with the noise it generates. Let me explain the issue. Unlike the previous fan that I bought from your kiosk, the new one generates excessive noise every time it is connected to a laptop. There is a wiring problem in the basement of the product which might be causing the issue. Although the cooling pad works as expected, the sound generated is affecting my concentration thereby impacting the quality. Furthermore, With my house being the workstation, the noise causes a hindrance to all the telephonic meetings I attend. Considering the nature of my job, I urge you to have the item repaired at the earliest. However, If the repair is time-consuming, kindly have the accessory replaced. Thank you for being considerate. Yours Faithfully, Sabari Raja A R
Dear Sir,

I am writing to you to express my displeasure with the laptop fan procured from your shop on June 3rd. While the functioning of the equipment is fine, I am facing difficulties with the noise it generates.

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Let
me
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explain
the issue. Unlike the previous fan that I
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bought
from your kiosk, the new one generates excessive noise every time it
is connected
to a laptop. There is a wiring problem in the basement of the product which might be causing the issue.

Although the cooling pad works as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
, the sound generated is affecting my concentration thereby impacting the quality.
Furthermore
, With my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
being the workstation, the noise causes a hindrance to all the telephonic meetings I attend.

Considering the nature of my job, I urge you to have the item repaired at the earliest.

However
, If the repair is time-consuming, kindly have the accessory replaced.

Thank you for being considerate.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Sabari
Raja A R
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IELTS letter I am writing to express my interest to work at the head office of our company in New York. While the work and evnvironment at Chennai is fine,

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160 words
6.5
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