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I am writing this letter to seek your approval, to give a presentation to our project team about the recent conference, which I attended last week.

Dear Mr. John, I am writing this letter to seek your approval, to give a presentation to our project team about the recent conference, which I attended last week. I had attended a technical seminar on "Cloud Migration Techniques", which was conducted by the National techincal forum. A lot of techincal ideas were discussed in the conference and I would like to share the knowledge to our team. I am planning to come up with a simple powerpoint presentation with 10 slides, that can be presented to our team. This presentation will cover different cloud migration techinques and the architecture of enterprise cloud applications. I will make sure the entire session is completed by 30 minutes. I feel this session would be beneficial for our project team as well as the cloud migration team and hence we can include both teams. We can plan this session in our conference room, as it will accomodate around 20 people. I kindly request you to provide your approval on the same. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Siva Narayanaraj
Dear Mr. John,

I am writing this letter to seek your approval, to give a presentation to our project
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about the recent conference, which I attended last week.

I had attended a technical seminar on
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Cloud Migration Techniques
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, which
was conducted
by the National
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techincal
forum.
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A lot of
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techincal
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ideas
were discussed
in the conference and I would like to share the knowledge to our
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team
. I am planning to
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come
up with a simple
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powerpoint
presentation with 10 slides, that can
be presented
to our team.

This presentation will cover
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different
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cloud
migration
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techinques
and the architecture of enterprise
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cloud
applications. I will
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make
sure the entire session
is completed
by 30 minutes.

I feel this session would be beneficial for our project
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team
as well
as the
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cloud
migration
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
team
and
hence
we can include both
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teams
. We can plan this session in our conference room, as it will
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accomodate
around 20
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people
.

I kindly request you to provide your approval on the same. Looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Siva
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Narayanaraj
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IELTS letter I am writing this letter to seek your approval, to give a presentation to our project team about the recent conference, which I attended last week.

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178 words
6.0
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