Dear Visa Officer,
I am writing this letter in support of my visa application to your consulate.
In this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying Software Engineering Technology Advanced Diploma for 3 years in Canada as an international student. From beginning to end, I will mention my background, family ties, after that why I want to study in Canada, also Conestoga College will be explained in detail, and then what I have done so far regarding accepting Conestoga, after which I will refer to my social life. Moreover, I am going to address my previous issues, which are related to my first application. I would like to mention my financial supporter at the end of the letter.
I was born in Maltepe/Istanbul on the 17th of July 2003. As I documented, I graduated from Fenerbahce Anatolian High School this year with a high GPA Score. Even if my specific field is not stated by the ministry of education’s high school diploma, my major is numeric. Additionally, my primary school, which is called E. C. A Elginkan İlkogretim Okulu in Kucukyali/ Maltepe, is the same as my brother’s school and middle school, which is named Hasan Sadoglu Ortaokulu in İdealtepe/Maltepe, is the same as my elder sister’s school.
Regarding my family; we are a 5 people family; These were me, my siblings, and my parents, but for now, we also have our sister’s husband and a little niece. About the occupations, my sister has graduated from the Nursing Program at Halic University. However, after graduation, she changed her occupation and opened her own company on wedding organizations and newborn photography. Her husband is a partner of a company focused on manufacturing wet napkins. My mother is a housewife. However, she has been assisting our little supermarket sometimes since it was established. My brother, 23. 07. 2007 (14), just finished secondary school. Lastly, my father, who will be my investor during my studies, has been running his own businesses in the food sector. Apart from his business, we also have rental income through our real estate in Istanbul.
I can assure you that during my studies in Canada, I am going to miss my family a lot. Since I have my core family living here and all of my relatives, I live in Turkey. There is no way for me to abandon them and set life without them in a totally foreign country. I cannot leave them totally; the only thing that my mother said to me is, “I should visit them every year, maybe twice. ” She will also miss me, and I will miss all of them too.
You can have an opinion that I will go there and never come back to Turkey. But it’s so obvious that you didn’t objectively evaluate my file. I know that many Turkish citizens are going to Canada permanently, but I am not one of them. I really couldn’t understand what makes you think I don’t have enough ties with Turkey? I have included my educational documents, financial details and all required documents mentioned on your website. And they don’t reflect my family ties because it’s sentimental value, not a provable thing that you can see or touch over my documents. You don’t know my family life, how we spend our time together and get in touch with each other all the time. We are a crowded family; siblings, grandparents, cousins, aunts and uncles. For example, we go to our village every summer since my childhood to visit our elders and spend time with them. Unlike the other countries, generally, we live with our parents if we are not married or go to another city for education. Raising in such a medium brings you more responsibility than usual. We were all raised by our mother and grandmother with our creeds and traditions. I am requesting you to think once more about my purpose. I am a new graduate from high school and willing to continue my education in Canada. To pursue my dreams on time, I completed a pathway program while I was studying my last semester in high school.
Not only my family is the tie to turn back from Canada, and also my true friends are called Cem, Yigit, Sedef, and Tuana. They are special to me, and we have been friends since I was in elementary school. They were consistent with me when my situation is whatever it is just like my dear family. Luckily, I have these people in my life. Therefore, I also realized that when I opened my mind to them about studying in Canada, they have always been supportive, especially my family, because when I told the idea to other people, they said that I am so lucky to have my family. The reason is that my education is the highest priority from the perspective of my father and mother, even though we will remain separate.
The reason for requesting to study in Canada is that the education system possesses a didactic education pattern, as well as opportunities are unlimited for internships such as one of Google's lodges in Kitchener/Waterloo, but Turkey’s education system doesn’t consist of a hands-on learning system and I believe that internships and get in touch with the real industry are crucial for the computer engineering field. While you are promoting your colleges and country for a place to have a good education, why I don’t prefer studying Canada if I have enough possibility? Before the pandemic, there are 3 different fairs held in Turkey, and %80 of the schools were coming from Canada, which means they need students; it means Canada is looking for good candidates for studying; so I would like to try my chance. All of those meetings in that years and also my counselling with my supervisor convinced me to choose my place for studying in Canada.
I also would like to mention my personality; I am a young, optimistic and reliable person. While I was choosing my destination country, my family believed in me and gave me full support for my educational needs. I will not betray them by not returning to Turkey and only communicate with them over internet calls. I will visit them at least once a year and spend quality time together.
In my social life; my past was very colourful and lively had many activities, for instance, I performed in many plays like Molière L’Avare. Also, at the nanotechnology club, I took part in a project about Nitinol, so both my team and I did an excellent job. Recently, I also attended a project that is related to anti-matter at TUBITAK, as I attached. I participated in so many sports such as basketball, volleyball, kick-box, karate. I am so glad that I could accomplish all of them as these activities made me such a sociable and extroverted person.
For Conestoga College, as I searched on the internet and examined the graduate routes over Linkedin, many alumni found excellent jobs after graduation. Also, the place where the college is will allow me to feel the industrial smell at the same time. The school is so close to industry, and they will give me the best hands-on learning education which I need for it. Focusing on IT, when I was 3 years old, my father had an internet cafe, and I have spent so much time in that place. Those days make me wonder about computer systems, and it made me follow regular IT magazines, TV programs regarding new technologies, and articles on the internet. I am sure that Conestoga would certainly give me adequate knowledge of computing. As mentioned above, the internships will be definitely helpful as well.
Nearly one year ago, I did not know anything about the English language. As I said above, I studied a lot, and I completed my high school at Fenerbahce Anatolian High School with a high GPA score and language pathway program at the same time. To get an unconditional offer from Conestoga college, I needed to show I have the required level from ILAC Language School. As attached, you can see the related certificate, Pathway 3. 3 level.
Even if I want to be part of Canada's cultural diversity, I will miss my main culture and family while studying in Canada. In my country, people are so close to each other and have a hospitality culture. I will be a software engineer about the employment circumstances, so my job is a global and demanding career due to digitalization on earth. In the future, I would like to focus on Game Development and set up my own business. The first of these goals is to equip myself with Computer Systems and then move to Game Design Systems.
With your objective consideration, I want to apply for a Canadian visa once more and hopefully obtain your permit in the end. I hope that this letter and the new documents I attached to my application will be enough to convince you about my visit to Canada. Once again, I want to say that my only aim is to study in Canada, not abandon my family, country, friends, and sentimental values behind. I only want to have a good education in your country and be a global student while studying.
If you require further information or document; you can always contact me with the information below.
Sincerely,
Thank you so much for being so considerate. 
Dear Visa Officer,
I am writing this letter in support of my visa application to your consulate.
In this letter, I would like to express my interest in  
studying
 Software Engineering Technology Advanced Diploma for 3 years in Canada as an international student. From beginning to  
end
, I will mention my background,  
family
 ties, after that why I  
want
 to  
study
 in Canada,  
also
 Conestoga College will be  
explained
 in detail, and then what I have done  
so
 far regarding accepting Conestoga, after which I will refer to my social  
life
.  
Moreover
, I am going to address my previous issues, which  
are related
 to my  
first
 application. I would like to mention my financial supporter at the  
end
 of the letter.
I  
was born
 in  
Maltepe
/Istanbul on the 17th of July 2003. As I documented, I graduated from  
Fenerbahce
 Anatolian  
High
  School
 this  
year
 with a  
high
 GPA Score. Even if my specific field is not stated by the ministry of  
education’s
  high
  school
 diploma, my major is numeric.  
Additionally
, my primary  
school
, which  
is called
 E. C. A  
Elginkan
  İlkogretim
  Okulu
 in  
Kucukyali
/  
Maltepe
, is the same as my brother’s  
school
 and middle  
school
, which  
is named
  Hasan
  Sadoglu
  Ortaokulu
 in  
İdealtepe
/ 
Maltepe
, is the same as my elder sister’s school.
Regarding my  
family
; we are a 5  
people
  family
; These  
were
 me, my siblings, and my parents, bu 
t f
or no 
w, 
we al 
so h
ave our sister’s husband and a li 
ttle n
iece. About the occupations, my sister has graduated from the Nursing  
Program
 at  
Halic
 University. Ho 
wever, 
after graduation, she ch 
anged h
er occupation and opened her ow 
n c
o 
mpany o
n wedding organizations and newborn photography. Her husband is a partner of a co 
mpany f
ocused on manufacturing wet napkins. My  
mother
 is a housewife. Ho 
wever, 
she has been assisting our li 
ttle s
upermarket so 
metimes s
ince it  
was established
. My brother, 23. 07. 2007 (14), ju 
st f
inished secondary  
school
.  
Lastly
, my father, who will be my investor during my  
studies
, has been running his ow 
n b
usinesses in the food sector. Apart from his business, we al 
so h
ave rental income through our real estate in Istanbul.
I can assure you that during my  
studies
 in Canada, I am going to miss my  
family
 a lot. Since I have my core  
family
 living here and all of my relatives, I li 
ve i
n Turkey. There is no way for me to abandon them and set  
life
 without them in a  
totally
 foreign  
country
. I cannot le 
ave t
hem  
totally
; the on 
ly t
hing that my  
mother
 said to me is, “I should  
visit
 them every  
year
, maybe twice. ” She will al 
so m
iss me, and I will miss all of them too.
You can have an opinion that I will go there and never co 
me b
ack to Turkey. Bu 
t i
t’s so 
 o
bvious that you didn’t  
objectively
 evaluate my file. I know that ma 
ny T
urkish citizens are going to Canada  
permanently
, bu 
t I
 am not one of them. I  
really
 couldn’t understand what ma 
kes y
ou th 
ink I
 don’t have en 
ough t
ies with Turkey?  
I
 have included my educational  
documents
, financial de 
tails a
nd all required  
documents
 mentioned on your website. And they don’t reflect my  
family
 ties because  
it’s sentimental value
, not a provable thing that you can se 
e o
r touch over my  
documents
. You don’t know my  
family
  life
, how we spend our  
time
 together and ge 
t i
n touch with each  
other
 all the  
time
. We are a crowded  
family
; siblings, grandparents, cousins, aunts and uncles. Fo 
r example, 
we go to our village every summer since my childhood to  
visit
 our elders and spend  
time
 with them. Unlike the  
other
  countries
, ge 
nerally, 
we li 
ve w
ith our parents if we are not married or go to another city for  
education
. Raising in such a medium brings you more responsibility than usual. We were all raised by our  
mother
 and grandmother with our creeds and traditions. I am requesting you to think  
once
 more about my purpose. I am a new graduate from  
high
  school
 and willing to continue my  
education
 in Canada. To pursue my dreams on  
time
, I completed a pathway  
program
 while I was  
studying
 my last semester in  
high
 school.
Not on 
ly m
y  
family
 is the tie to turn back from Canada, and al 
so m
y true friends  
are called
  Cem
,  
Yigit
,  
Sedef
, and  
Tuana
. They are special to me, and we have been friends since I was in elementary  
school
. They were consistent with me when my situation is whatever it is ju 
st l
ike my dear  
family
. Luckily, I have these pe 
ople i
n my  
life
. Th 
erefore, 
I al 
so r
ealized that when I opened my mind to them about  
studying
 in Canada, they have always been supportive, es 
pecially m
y  
family
, be 
cause w
hen I to 
ld t
he id 
ea t
o  
other
 pe 
ople, 
they said that I am so 
 l
ucky to have my  
family
. The reason is that my  
education
 is the highest priority from the perspective of my father and  
mother
, ev 
en though w
e will remain separate.
The reason for requesting to  
study
 in Canada is that the  
education
  system
 possesses a didactic  
education
 pattern, as 
 well a
s opportunities  
are unlimited
 for internships such as one of Google's lodges in Kitchener/Waterloo, bu 
t T
urkey’s  
education
  system
 doesn’t consist of a hands-on learning  
system
 and I believe that internships and ge 
t i
n touch with the real industry are crucial for the computer engineering field. While you are promoting your colleges and  
country
 for a  
place
 to have a good  
education
, why I don’t prefer  
studying
 Canada if I have en 
ough p
ossibility? Be 
fore t
he pandemic, there are 3 di 
fferent f
airs held in Turkey, and %80 of the  
schools
 were coming from Canada, which means they need students; it means Canada is looking for go 
od c
andidates for  
studying
; so 
 I
 would like to try my chance. All of those meetings in that years and al 
so m
y counselling with my supervisor convinced me to choose my  
place
 for  
studying
 in Canada.
I al 
so w
ould like to mention my personality; I am a young, optimistic and reliable person. While I was choosing my destination  
country
, my  
family
 believed in me and gave me full support for my educational needs. I will not betray them by not returning to Turkey and on 
ly c
ommunicate with them over internet calls. I will  
visit
 them at least  
once
 a  
year
 and spend quality  
time
 together.
In my social  
life
; my past was very  
colourful
 and lively had ma 
ny a
ctivities, fo 
r instance, 
I performed in ma 
ny p
lays like Molière L’ 
Avare
. Al 
so, 
at the nanotechnology club, I to 
ok part i
n a project about  
Nitinol
, so 
 b
oth my team and I did an excellent job. Recently, I al 
so a
ttended a project that  
is related
 to anti-matter at  
TUBITAK
, as I attached. I participated in so 
 m
a 
ny s
ports such as basketball, volleyball, kick-box, karate. I am so 
 g
lad that I could accomplish all of them as these activities made me such a sociable and extroverted person.
For Conestoga College, as I searched on the internet and examined the graduate routes over  
Linkedin
, ma 
ny a
lumni found excellent jobs after graduation. Al 
so, 
the  
place
 where the college is will al 
low m
e to feel the industrial smell at the same  
time
. The  
school
 is so 
 c
lose to industry, and they will give me the best hands-on learning  
education
 which I need for it. Focusing on IT, when I was 3 years ol 
d, 
my father had an internet  
cafe
, and I have spent so 
 m
uch  
time
 in that  
place
. Those days ma 
ke m
e wonder about computer  
systems
, and it made me follow regular IT magazines, TV  
programs
 regarding new technologies, and articles on the internet. I am sure that Conestoga would  
certainly
 give me adequate knowledge of computing. As mentioned above, the internships will be definitely helpful as 
 well.
 Nearly
 one  
year
 ago, I did not know anything about the English language. As I said above, I studied a lot, and I completed my  
high
  school
 at  
Fenerbahce
 Anatolian  
High
  School
 with a  
high
 GPA score and language pathway  
program
 at the same  
time
. To ge 
t a
n unconditional offer from Conestoga college, I needed to sh 
ow I
 have the required level from  
ILAC
 Language  
School
. As attached, you can se 
e t
he related certificate, Pathway 3. 3 level.
Even if I  
want
 to be part of Canada's cultural diversity, I will miss my main culture and  
family
 while  
studying
 in Canada. In my  
country
, pe 
ople a
re so 
 c
lose to each  
other
 and have a hospitality culture. I will be a software engineer about the employment circumstances, so 
 m
y job is a global and demanding career due to digitalization on earth. In the future, I would like to focus on Game Development and set up my ow 
n b
usiness. The fi 
rst o
f these goals is to equip myself with Computer  
Systems
 and then mo 
ve t
o Game Design Systems.
With your objective consideration, I  
want
 to apply for a Canadian visa  
once
 more and  
hopefully
 obtain your permit in the en 
d. 
I hope that this letter and the new  
documents
 I attached to my application will be en 
ough t
o convince you about my  
visit
 to Canada.  
Once
 again, I  
want
 to say that my on 
ly a
im is to  
study
 in Canada, not abandon my  
family
,  
country
, friends, and sentimental values behind. I  
only
  want
 to have a good  
education
 in your  
country
 and be a global student while studying.
If you require fu 
rther i
nformation or  
document
; you can always contact me with the information below. 
Sincerely
,
Thank you so 
 m
uch for being so 
 c
onsiderate.