Dear Visa Officer,
I am writing this letter in support of my visa application to your consulate.
In this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying Software Engineering Technology Advanced Diploma for 3 years in Canada as an international student. From beginning to end, I will mention my background, family ties, after that why I want to study in Canada, also Conestoga College will be explained in detail, and then what I have done so far regarding accepting Conestoga, after which I will refer to my social life. Moreover, I am going to address my previous issues, which are related to my first application. I would like to mention my financial supporter at the end of the letter.
I was born in Maltepe/Istanbul on the 17th of July 2003. As I documented, I graduated from Fenerbahce Anatolian High School this year with a high GPA Score. Even if my specific field is not stated by the ministry of education’s high school diploma, my major is numeric. Additionally, my primary school, which is called E. C. A Elginkan İlkogretim Okulu in Kucukyali/ Maltepe, is the same as my brother’s school and middle school, which is named Hasan Sadoglu Ortaokulu in İdealtepe/Maltepe, is the same as my elder sister’s school.
Regarding my family; we are a 5 people family; These were me, my siblings, and my parents, but for now, we also have our sister’s husband and a little niece. About the occupations, my sister has graduated from the Nursing Program at Halic University. However, after graduation, she changed her occupation and opened her own company on wedding organizations and newborn photography. Her husband is a partner of a company focused on manufacturing wet napkins. My mother is a housewife. However, she has been assisting our little supermarket sometimes since it was established. My brother, 23. 07. 2007 (14), just finished secondary school. Lastly, my father, who will be my investor during my studies, has been running his own businesses in the food sector. Apart from his business, we also have rental income through our real estate in Istanbul.
I can assure you that during my studies in Canada, I am going to miss my family a lot. Since I have my core family living here and all of my relatives, I live in Turkey. There is no way for me to abandon them and set life without them in a totally foreign country. I cannot leave them totally; the only thing that my mother said to me is, “I should visit them every year, maybe twice. ” She will also miss me, and I will miss all of them too.
You can have an opinion that I will go there and never come back to Turkey. But it’s so obvious that you didn’t objectively evaluate my file. I know that many Turkish citizens are going to Canada permanently, but I am not one of them. I really couldn’t understand what makes you think I don’t have enough ties with Turkey? I have included my educational documents, financial details and all required documents mentioned on your website. And they don’t reflect my family ties because it’s sentimental value, not a provable thing that you can see or touch over my documents. You don’t know my family life, how we spend our time together and get in touch with each other all the time. We are a crowded family; siblings, grandparents, cousins, aunts and uncles. For example, we go to our village every summer since my childhood to visit our elders and spend time with them. Unlike the other countries, generally, we live with our parents if we are not married or go to another city for education. Raising in such a medium brings you more responsibility than usual. We were all raised by our mother and grandmother with our creeds and traditions. I am requesting you to think once more about my purpose. I am a new graduate from high school and willing to continue my education in Canada. To pursue my dreams on time, I completed a pathway program while I was studying my last semester in high school.
Not only my family is the tie to turn back from Canada, and also my true friends are called Cem, Yigit, Sedef, and Tuana. They are special to me, and we have been friends since I was in elementary school. They were consistent with me when my situation is whatever it is just like my dear family. Luckily, I have these people in my life. Therefore, I also realized that when I opened my mind to them about studying in Canada, they have always been supportive, especially my family, because when I told the idea to other people, they said that I am so lucky to have my family. The reason is that my education is the highest priority from the perspective of my father and mother, even though we will remain separate.
The reason for requesting to study in Canada is that the education system possesses a didactic education pattern, as well as opportunities are unlimited for internships such as one of Google's lodges in Kitchener/Waterloo, but Turkey’s education system doesn’t consist of a hands-on learning system and I believe that internships and get in touch with the real industry are crucial for the computer engineering field. While you are promoting your colleges and country for a place to have a good education, why I don’t prefer studying Canada if I have enough possibility? Before the pandemic, there are 3 different fairs held in Turkey, and %80 of the schools were coming from Canada, which means they need students; it means Canada is looking for good candidates for studying; so I would like to try my chance. All of those meetings in that years and also my counselling with my supervisor convinced me to choose my place for studying in Canada.
I also would like to mention my personality; I am a young, optimistic and reliable person. While I was choosing my destination country, my family believed in me and gave me full support for my educational needs. I will not betray them by not returning to Turkey and only communicate with them over internet calls. I will visit them at least once a year and spend quality time together.
In my social life; my past was very colourful and lively had many activities, for instance, I performed in many plays like Molière L’Avare. Also, at the nanotechnology club, I took part in a project about Nitinol, so both my team and I did an excellent job. Recently, I also attended a project that is related to anti-matter at TUBITAK, as I attached. I participated in so many sports such as basketball, volleyball, kick-box, karate. I am so glad that I could accomplish all of them as these activities made me such a sociable and extroverted person.
For Conestoga College, as I searched on the internet and examined the graduate routes over Linkedin, many alumni found excellent jobs after graduation. Also, the place where the college is will allow me to feel the industrial smell at the same time. The school is so close to industry, and they will give me the best hands-on learning education which I need for it. Focusing on IT, when I was 3 years old, my father had an internet cafe, and I have spent so much time in that place. Those days make me wonder about computer systems, and it made me follow regular IT magazines, TV programs regarding new technologies, and articles on the internet. I am sure that Conestoga would certainly give me adequate knowledge of computing. As mentioned above, the internships will be definitely helpful as well.
Nearly one year ago, I did not know anything about the English language. As I said above, I studied a lot, and I completed my high school at Fenerbahce Anatolian High School with a high GPA score and language pathway program at the same time. To get an unconditional offer from Conestoga college, I needed to show I have the required level from ILAC Language School. As attached, you can see the related certificate, Pathway 3. 3 level.
Even if I want to be part of Canada's cultural diversity, I will miss my main culture and family while studying in Canada. In my country, people are so close to each other and have a hospitality culture. I will be a software engineer about the employment circumstances, so my job is a global and demanding career due to digitalization on earth. In the future, I would like to focus on Game Development and set up my own business. The first of these goals is to equip myself with Computer Systems and then move to Game Design Systems.
With your objective consideration, I want to apply for a Canadian visa once more and hopefully obtain your permit in the end. I hope that this letter and the new documents I attached to my application will be enough to convince you about my visit to Canada. Once again, I want to say that my only aim is to study in Canada, not abandon my family, country, friends, and sentimental values behind. I only want to have a good education in your country and be a global student while studying.
If you require further information or document; you can always contact me with the information below.
Sincerely,
Thank you so much for being so considerate.
Dear Visa Officer,
I am writing this letter in support of my visa application to your consulate.
In this letter, I would like to express my interest in
studying
Software Engineering Technology Advanced Diploma for 3 years in Canada as an international student. From beginning to
end
, I will mention my background,
family
ties, after that why I
want
to
study
in Canada,
also
Conestoga College will be
explained
in detail, and then what I have done
so
far regarding accepting Conestoga, after which I will refer to my social
life
.
Moreover
, I am going to address my previous issues, which
are related
to my
first
application. I would like to mention my financial supporter at the
end
of the letter.
I
was born
in
Maltepe
/Istanbul on the 17th of July 2003. As I documented, I graduated from
Fenerbahce
Anatolian
High
School
this
year
with a
high
GPA Score. Even if my specific field is not stated by the ministry of
education’s
high
school
diploma, my major is numeric.
Additionally
, my primary
school
, which
is called
E. C. A
Elginkan
İlkogretim
Okulu
in
Kucukyali
/
Maltepe
, is the same as my brother’s
school
and middle
school
, which
is named
Hasan
Sadoglu
Ortaokulu
in
İdealtepe
/
Maltepe
, is the same as my elder sister’s school.
Regarding my
family
; we are a 5
people
family
; These
were
me, my siblings, and my parents, bu
t f
or no
w,
we al
so h
ave our sister’s husband and a li
ttle n
iece. About the occupations, my sister has graduated from the Nursing
Program
at
Halic
University. Ho
wever,
after graduation, she ch
anged h
er occupation and opened her ow
n c
o
mpany o
n wedding organizations and newborn photography. Her husband is a partner of a co
mpany f
ocused on manufacturing wet napkins. My
mother
is a housewife. Ho
wever,
she has been assisting our li
ttle s
upermarket so
metimes s
ince it
was established
. My brother, 23. 07. 2007 (14), ju
st f
inished secondary
school
.
Lastly
, my father, who will be my investor during my
studies
, has been running his ow
n b
usinesses in the food sector. Apart from his business, we al
so h
ave rental income through our real estate in Istanbul.
I can assure you that during my
studies
in Canada, I am going to miss my
family
a lot. Since I have my core
family
living here and all of my relatives, I li
ve i
n Turkey. There is no way for me to abandon them and set
life
without them in a
totally
foreign
country
. I cannot le
ave t
hem
totally
; the on
ly t
hing that my
mother
said to me is, “I should
visit
them every
year
, maybe twice. ” She will al
so m
iss me, and I will miss all of them too.
You can have an opinion that I will go there and never co
me b
ack to Turkey. Bu
t i
t’s so
o
bvious that you didn’t
objectively
evaluate my file. I know that ma
ny T
urkish citizens are going to Canada
permanently
, bu
t I
am not one of them. I
really
couldn’t understand what ma
kes y
ou th
ink I
don’t have en
ough t
ies with Turkey?
I
have included my educational
documents
, financial de
tails a
nd all required
documents
mentioned on your website. And they don’t reflect my
family
ties because
it’s sentimental value
, not a provable thing that you can se
e o
r touch over my
documents
. You don’t know my
family
life
, how we spend our
time
together and ge
t i
n touch with each
other
all the
time
. We are a crowded
family
; siblings, grandparents, cousins, aunts and uncles. Fo
r example,
we go to our village every summer since my childhood to
visit
our elders and spend
time
with them. Unlike the
other
countries
, ge
nerally,
we li
ve w
ith our parents if we are not married or go to another city for
education
. Raising in such a medium brings you more responsibility than usual. We were all raised by our
mother
and grandmother with our creeds and traditions. I am requesting you to think
once
more about my purpose. I am a new graduate from
high
school
and willing to continue my
education
in Canada. To pursue my dreams on
time
, I completed a pathway
program
while I was
studying
my last semester in
high
school.
Not on
ly m
y
family
is the tie to turn back from Canada, and al
so m
y true friends
are called
Cem
,
Yigit
,
Sedef
, and
Tuana
. They are special to me, and we have been friends since I was in elementary
school
. They were consistent with me when my situation is whatever it is ju
st l
ike my dear
family
. Luckily, I have these pe
ople i
n my
life
. Th
erefore,
I al
so r
ealized that when I opened my mind to them about
studying
in Canada, they have always been supportive, es
pecially m
y
family
, be
cause w
hen I to
ld t
he id
ea t
o
other
pe
ople,
they said that I am so
l
ucky to have my
family
. The reason is that my
education
is the highest priority from the perspective of my father and
mother
, ev
en though w
e will remain separate.
The reason for requesting to
study
in Canada is that the
education
system
possesses a didactic
education
pattern, as
well a
s opportunities
are unlimited
for internships such as one of Google's lodges in Kitchener/Waterloo, bu
t T
urkey’s
education
system
doesn’t consist of a hands-on learning
system
and I believe that internships and ge
t i
n touch with the real industry are crucial for the computer engineering field. While you are promoting your colleges and
country
for a
place
to have a good
education
, why I don’t prefer
studying
Canada if I have en
ough p
ossibility? Be
fore t
he pandemic, there are 3 di
fferent f
airs held in Turkey, and %80 of the
schools
were coming from Canada, which means they need students; it means Canada is looking for go
od c
andidates for
studying
; so
I
would like to try my chance. All of those meetings in that years and al
so m
y counselling with my supervisor convinced me to choose my
place
for
studying
in Canada.
I al
so w
ould like to mention my personality; I am a young, optimistic and reliable person. While I was choosing my destination
country
, my
family
believed in me and gave me full support for my educational needs. I will not betray them by not returning to Turkey and on
ly c
ommunicate with them over internet calls. I will
visit
them at least
once
a
year
and spend quality
time
together.
In my social
life
; my past was very
colourful
and lively had ma
ny a
ctivities, fo
r instance,
I performed in ma
ny p
lays like Molière L’
Avare
. Al
so,
at the nanotechnology club, I to
ok part i
n a project about
Nitinol
, so
b
oth my team and I did an excellent job. Recently, I al
so a
ttended a project that
is related
to anti-matter at
TUBITAK
, as I attached. I participated in so
m
a
ny s
ports such as basketball, volleyball, kick-box, karate. I am so
g
lad that I could accomplish all of them as these activities made me such a sociable and extroverted person.
For Conestoga College, as I searched on the internet and examined the graduate routes over
Linkedin
, ma
ny a
lumni found excellent jobs after graduation. Al
so,
the
place
where the college is will al
low m
e to feel the industrial smell at the same
time
. The
school
is so
c
lose to industry, and they will give me the best hands-on learning
education
which I need for it. Focusing on IT, when I was 3 years ol
d,
my father had an internet
cafe
, and I have spent so
m
uch
time
in that
place
. Those days ma
ke m
e wonder about computer
systems
, and it made me follow regular IT magazines, TV
programs
regarding new technologies, and articles on the internet. I am sure that Conestoga would
certainly
give me adequate knowledge of computing. As mentioned above, the internships will be definitely helpful as
well.
Nearly
one
year
ago, I did not know anything about the English language. As I said above, I studied a lot, and I completed my
high
school
at
Fenerbahce
Anatolian
High
School
with a
high
GPA score and language pathway
program
at the same
time
. To ge
t a
n unconditional offer from Conestoga college, I needed to sh
ow I
have the required level from
ILAC
Language
School
. As attached, you can se
e t
he related certificate, Pathway 3. 3 level.
Even if I
want
to be part of Canada's cultural diversity, I will miss my main culture and
family
while
studying
in Canada. In my
country
, pe
ople a
re so
c
lose to each
other
and have a hospitality culture. I will be a software engineer about the employment circumstances, so
m
y job is a global and demanding career due to digitalization on earth. In the future, I would like to focus on Game Development and set up my ow
n b
usiness. The fi
rst o
f these goals is to equip myself with Computer
Systems
and then mo
ve t
o Game Design Systems.
With your objective consideration, I
want
to apply for a Canadian visa
once
more and
hopefully
obtain your permit in the en
d.
I hope that this letter and the new
documents
I attached to my application will be en
ough t
o convince you about my
visit
to Canada.
Once
again, I
want
to say that my on
ly a
im is to
study
in Canada, not abandon my
family
,
country
, friends, and sentimental values behind. I
only
want
to have a good
education
in your
country
and be a global student while studying.
If you require fu
rther i
nformation or
document
; you can always contact me with the information below.
Sincerely
,
Thank you so
m
uch for being so
c
onsiderate.