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a complain letter to the manager because of their service

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Dear Today Center’s manage, I’am writing to express my dissatisfaction, which is happen after two weeks studying at your English center. Firstly, I have to mention the problem that I has gone through. My English teacher had a very annoyed attitude when I ask about the detail again because he taught very fast. Therefore, I absolutely can not catch the main ideas of the class and get confused. Moreover, the infrastructure as well as support learning tools have been deteriorated and old, which is completely different from the advertising. Overall, I would like a refund as soon as possible, I am willing to set a talk with you if it in need. Looking forward to hearing from you, Dong
Dear
Today
Center’s manage,

I’
am
writing to express my dissatisfaction, which is
happen
after two weeks studying at your English center.
Firstly
, I
have to
mention the problem that I
has
gone through. My English teacher had a
very
annoyed attitude when I ask about the detail again
because
he taught
very
fast
.
Therefore
, I
absolutely
can not catch the main
ideas
of the
class
and
get
confused.
Moreover
, the infrastructure
as well
as support learning tools have
been deteriorated
and
old
, which is completely
different
from the advertising.
Overall
, I would like a refund as
soon
as possible, I am willing to set a talk with you if it in need.

Looking forward to hearing from you,

Dong
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IELTS letter a complain letter to the manager because of their service

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
118 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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