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Letter to neighbor on loud music

Letter to neighbor on loud music JwOeD
Dear Mishra ji I hope you are in best of spirits and health. I am writing this letter on behalf of my entire family regarding the loud music that is being played late at night. I live adjacent to your apartment (flat 1034) and often we are disturbed from our sleeps with loud noise and sound of the music. This situation is causing inconvenience to all of us. Not to mention it is also creating hindrance in our daily schedule. Due to lack of proper sleep I find the members of my family cranky and exhausted. My elder daughter's exams are scheduled for next month, and due to deafening sound of the music she fails to concentrate. Therefore, I request you to look through this matter. I hope you would take my request into consideration. Yours Faithfully Vasundhra
Dear Mishra
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I hope you are in best of spirits and health. I am writing this letter on behalf of my entire family regarding the loud music
that is
being played
late at night.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
adjacent to your apartment (flat 1034) and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
we
are disturbed
from our sleeps with loud noise and sound of the music.

This situation is causing inconvenience to all of us. Not to mention it is
also
creating hindrance in our daily schedule. Due to lack of proper sleep I find the members of my family cranky and exhausted. My elder daughter's exams
are scheduled
for
next
month, and due to deafening sound of the music she fails to concentrate.

Therefore
, I request you to look through this matter. I hope you would take my request into consideration.

Yours
Faithfully


Possible spelling mistake found.
Vasundhra
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IELTS letter Letter to neighbor on loud music

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
137 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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