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I am writing in response to the complaint I received that the noise from my flat is high and disturbing.

I am writing in response to the complaint I received that the noise from my flat is high and disturbing. GM39Q

Dear Flat Mates, I am writing in response to the complaint I received that the noise from my flat is high and disturbing. With my newborn baby, It has been difficult to focus on other aspects of the flat and I shall be considerate of your concerns. As you guys know I recently became a father. Being the young couple that we are, the past few months have been hectic. When the baby cries, it takes us time to understand and console, admittedly, It is indeed Noisy Furthermore, We have been having frequent guests and this would have added to the sound issues. I would like to express my deepest regrets for the hindrance caused to all the neighbours. Not only do I owe you guys my apology, but also I would like to make amends for the problems caused. I had a discussion with an interior designer and he suggested a few noise cancellation ideas. One viable solution is to soundproof the windows and I shall implement them, albeit expensive. Once again, I am extremely sorry for the chaos created. Friend, Sabari

Dear Flat Mates,

I am writing in response to the complaint I received that the noise from my flat is high and disturbing.

With my newborn baby, It has been difficult to focus on other aspects of the flat and I shall be considerate of your concerns.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 you guys know I recently became a father.

Being the young couple that we are, the past few months have been hectic.

When the baby cries, it takes us time to understand and console, admittedly
, It is indeed
 Noisy

Furthermore
, We have been having frequent guests and this would have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the sound issues.

I would like to express my deepest regrets for the hindrance caused to all the Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.neighbors
neighbours
.

Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 do I owe you guys my apology, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 amends for the problems caused.

I had a discussion with an interior Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).designer, and
designer and
 he suggested a few noise cancellation This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
.

One viable solution is to soundproof the windows and I shall implement them, albeit expensive.

Once again, I am extremely
 sorry for the chaos created.

Friend,

Possible spelling mistake found.Safari
Sabari