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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know about a problem with the garbage collection service in my area.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know about a problem with the garbage collection service in my area. Jo33w

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know about a problem with the garbage collection service in my area. The collection of trash is irregular, which is causing pollution. There are improvements needed in the system to solve this problem. The service is not running as per schedule, as sometimes, they pick up the garbage twice a week or even less frequently. Moreover, the team does not clean all the areas properly, leaving some of the trash behind. The rubbish left over in the area is causing pollution and hence it is a serious threat to the health of the residents. Also, there has been an increase in the number of mosquitoes as well as the smell in the surroundings. Considering the seriousness of the problem, I demand stringent action. The service should regularly pick up the trash and clean all areas properly. Additionally, please implement changes in the team to improve the quality of the service. I hope you are willing to accept my solution. Yours faithfully, Muhammad Ahmad

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know about a problem with the garbage collection service in my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. The collection of trash is irregular, which is causing pollution. There are improvements needed in the system to solve this problem.

The service is not running as per schedule, as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
, they pick up the garbage twice a week or even less frequently
. Moreover
, the team does not clean all the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
properly
, leaving If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 trash behind.

The rubbish This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 over in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 is causing pollution and hence
 it is a serious threat to the health of the residents. Also
, there has been an increase in the number of mosquitoes as well
 as the smell in the surroundings.

Considering the seriousness of the problem, I demand stringent action. The service should regularly
 pick up the trash and clean all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
properly
. Additionally
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 implement This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in the team to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the quality of the service.

I hope you are willing to accept my solution.

Yours faithfully
,

Muhammad Ahmad