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Dear Madam/Sir, My name is Naqash Sachwani. I am currently studying science general (computer science) from Aga Khan Higher Secondary School. This is my passion to get my future education in the field of computer science. I intended to get this scholarship to prove myself in the field of computer science. ​I have the potential that needs to be recognized by a reputed university. Since I have been a student of the sciences, I have shown good academic results in my previous years. I desire to get this scholarship so that I could deeply explore computer science. This scholarship is important for my future goals as it will lead to having broader exposure. I have been studying computer science for more than four years. This scholarship will provide me with the opportunity to study at a highly reputed university. This scholarship will create a path for me to get new experiences. I see myself as a professional IT (Information Technology) expert in the future. My aim in getting this scholarship is to meet with other IT (Information Technology) experts and get to know about their experiences. My target is to learn new things. I considered gaining benefits from experienced faculty. If this scholarship is awarded to me, the chances of my bright future increase. I am an eligible candidate for this scholarship as my educational background reflects my passion for this scholarship. I am a candidate you are looking for this scholarship. My skills and motivation towards my work will convince you to choose me. If you choose me for this scholarship it will provide me with support for my educational journey. This scholarship will help me to achieve success in the field of IT (Information Technology). hungary stipendium scholarship
Dear Madam/Sir,

My name is
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Naqash
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Sachwani
. I am
currently
studying
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science
general (computer
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science)
from
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Aga
Khan Higher Secondary School. This is my passion to
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get
my
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future
education in the field of computer
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science
. I intended to
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get
this
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scholarship
to prove myself in the field of computer
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science
. ​I have the potential that needs to
be recognized
by a reputed university. Since I have been a student of the
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sciences
, I have shown
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good
academic results in my previous years.

I desire to
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get
this
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scholarship
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so
that I could
deeply
explore computer
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science
. This
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scholarship
is
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important
for my
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future
goals as it will lead to having broader exposure.

I have been studying computer
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science
for more than four years. This
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scholarship
will provide me with the opportunity to study at a
highly
reputed university. This
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scholarship
will create a path for me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
new experiences. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
myself as a professional IT (Information Technology) expert in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
. My aim in getting this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
scholarship
is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
with other IT (Information Technology) experts and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
to know about their experiences.

My target is to learn new things. I considered gaining benefits from experienced faculty. If this
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scholarship
is awarded
to me, the chances of my bright
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future
increase. I am an eligible candidate for this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
scholarship
as my educational background reflects my passion for this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
scholarship
. I am a candidate you are looking for this scholarship.

My
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and motivation towards my work will convince you to choose me. If you choose me for this
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scholarship
it will provide me with support for my educational journey. This
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scholarship
will
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help
me to achieve success in the field of IT (Information Technology).
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5.5
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