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How to advice Granny about her new phone

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Hi Granny! I am so happy that you have discovered all the opportunities and the new functions we can done with the new devices. But please let me explain how can we improve our communication with this new opportunities. First of all, the way to exchange the message between us has become too fast and it is very difficult to follow all the information we received many time. So, to better send message and to avoid some important information flow, I think that we are to the use the honest full information. Actually, we can send the funny videos, animated postcard only in our free time. For example, n Sunday when I am not. . . In the end, when you send a voice message to me, could you please anticipate the argumenting right message, if I can't listen it in time, I learned the information as well. In the end, I would like to send you that it is a personal satisfaction to be able to teach you all of the new functions of the phone. This new way to that you can use to communicate to me.

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