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holiday for 2 weeks. ask your friend to go with you, explain where and when you want to go, give details of the travel, dates, and cost involved. describe some of things you want to do.

holiday for 2 weeks. ask your friend to go with you, explain where and when you want to go, give details of the travel, dates, and cost involved. describe some of things you want to do. VlYD7
Dear John, I am writing to ask you to go out with me for 2 weeks on holiday in Paris. I can understand this lockdown makes everyone stuck at home. I think we really need a break. I always been want to visit Eiffel tower so I decided to stay nearby hotel. I will meet you on Airport at 9: 00 am. The flight is at 11am on this Saturday. There is 200$ cost for tickets and I found an agent who will help us to find more places to explore. We willl back on 20 June. I also heard there is Picasso Museum I know you love the art. Moreover, we can try new cuisine which is Italian. I can’t wait to see you. Best wishes, Tavleen
Dear John,

I am writing to ask you to go out with me for 2 weeks on holiday in Paris.

I can understand this lockdown
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
everyone stuck at home.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
we
really
need a break.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
The adverb 'always' usually goes after the verb 'been'.
always been
want to visit
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
Eiffel tower
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I decided to stay nearby hotel.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you on Airport at 9: 00 am. The flight is at 11am on this Saturday. There is
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$200".
200$
cost for tickets and I found an agent who will
In informal texts, 'to' is not necessary. Do you mean "help us find"?
help us to find
more places to explore. We
Possible spelling mistake found.
willl
back on 20 June.

I
also
heard there is Picasso Museum I know you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
the art.
Moreover
, we can try new cuisine which is Italian.

I can’t wait to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you.

Best wishes,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Tavleen
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IELTS letter holiday for 2 weeks. ask your friend to go with you, explain where and when you want to go, give details of the travel, dates, and cost involved. describe some of things you want to do.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
127 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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