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Letter to you friend to find accommodation where she live

Letter to you friend to find accommodation where she live pKYQw
Dear Harman, I hope you are doing well, Before one month ego, I shared with you to chance of moving one place to another. I find a job in London of PSW. It is a good opportunity for me because I get good pay scale as well as I have increased my position. I just want to favour of you regarding to find a accommodation to live there. I will move next week on weekend. I will give some suggestion regarding house to you such as it should be apartment of two BHK. Try to find close to you so that I can meet with you to relief our stress as well as on my occasion. I already post on kijiji. com to find place.
Dear
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Harman
, I hope you are doing well,
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Before
one month ego, I shared with you to chance of moving one place to another. I
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find
a job in London of
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PSW
. It is a
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good
opportunity for me
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because
I
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get
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good
pay scale
as well
as I have increased my position. I
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just
want to
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favour
of you
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regarding to
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find
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "accommodation".
a accommodation
to
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live
there. I will
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move
next
week on weekend.
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I
will give
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some
suggestion regarding
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house
to you such as it should be apartment of two
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BHK
. Try to
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find
close to you
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so
that I can
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meet
with you to relief our
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stress
as well
as on my occasion. I already post on
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kijiji
.
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com
to
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find
place.
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IELTS letter Letter to you friend to find accommodation where she live

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
125 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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