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H A P P Y B I R T H D A Y !

H A P P Y B I R T H D A Y ! QwKkK
H A P P Y B I R T H D A Y! Dear my love LEM Today is such a wonderful and special day for you. I’m wondering if you know what is the day today? Yah! It is your birthday. Are you excited? I bet you are very much. It is very nice to get to know you, I still remember the first day we met. It was not even a special day, but it was a sign for both of us. You were very gorgeous in a white T-shirt and a black skirt and long straight untied hair. I was being attracted by you a lot and I couldn’t find a word to describe how beautiful and attractive you were. I hope you still remember everything we did together, every place we had gone through and the trip which we had so much fun. I know it wasn’t enough because those all things were very little for a special girl like you. Being together not just even a year, but I’m sure that we all can feel the strong invisible bond which is holding us until now. In you, I see you are a well-care person, you took care of me when I was sick without any complaints or even just a long breath. And now, I’m so worried about your health in this Covid time. I wish you still being in a good health, and I’m sorry for not being with you in this time, especially on your birthday. I know that a part in you will feel incomplete on today. However, be honest, I want we can stay with each other longer and ever last. On your birthday in this year, even though there will be no birthday cake, no candles, I still wish you the best of luck, wish you are successful in your career. I don’t what will be liked later and I don’t even care about it, but on today, all I can say is that I LOVE YOU and IF I HAVE KNOWN YOU SOONER, I WOULD HAVE LOVED YOU. August 21, 2021 Jogreen
H A P P Y B I R T H D A Y!

Dear my
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love
LEM

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Today
is such a wonderful and special day for you. I’m wondering if you
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know
what is the day
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today
?
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Yah
! It is your birthday.

Are you excited? I bet you are
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very
much.

It is
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very
nice to
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get
to
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know
you, I
still
remember the
first
day we met. It was not even a special day,
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but
it was a
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sign
for both of us. You were
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very
gorgeous in a white T-shirt and a black skirt and long straight untied hair. I was
being attracted
by you a lot and I couldn’t find a word to
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describe
how
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beautiful
and attractive you were.

I hope you
still
remember everything we did together, every place we had gone through and the trip which we had
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so
much fun.
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I
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know
it wasn’t
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enough
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because
those all things were
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very
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little
for a special girl like you.

Being together not
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even a year,
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I’m sure that we all can feel the strong invisible bond which is holding us until
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now
. In you, I
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see
you are a well-care person, you took care of me when I was sick without any complaints or even
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just
a long breath. And
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now
, I’m
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worried about your health in this
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Covid
time. I wish you
still
being in a
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good
health, and I’m sorry for not being with you in this time,
especially
on your birthday. I
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know
that a part in you will feel incomplete on
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today
.
However
, be honest, I want we can stay with each other longer and ever last.

On your birthday in this year,
even though
there will be no birthday cake, no candles, I
still
wish you the best of luck, wish you are successful in your career.

I don’t what will
be liked
later and I don’t even care about it,
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but
on
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today
, all I can say is that

I
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LOVE
YOU and IF I HAVE KNOWN YOU SOONER, I WOULD HAVE
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LOVED
YOU.

August 21,
Some style guides suggest that commas should set off the year in a month-day-year date: "2021,".
2021


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Jogreen

IELTS letter H A P P Y B I R T H D A Y !

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6.0
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