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Application letter to my boss

Application letter to my boss K0YMR
Dear Sir, It was announced by local radio channel that you have a vacancy for an economist in your company and I have always dreamt of working with its workers in the same place. I am forty years old and obtained a degree in economist at Fergana Polytechnic Institute in 2004. I feel I have some important qualifications that this job needs. I am working as a book keeper in a joint venture for the time being. I have been working there over the past ten years. Together with it I participate in the course on Financial Accounting for auditors which opened in our city last year. By the way, I was awarded with a certificate about finishing the course of “Tax and Law” which was held in 2002 in our Institute by the USAID organization when I was a student. I am responsible for my duty, honest and can easily get on with colleagues where I work in. Except it I am very cheerful and capable. The tasks are always done on time by me if they are given by administration where I work at. Moreover, I can speak in two languages, such as, Russian and English. It is not matter to me to make official files in computer. I would be happy if I could attend an interview with you and was employed as a worker of your company. Thank you in advance for your attention to my letter. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Your faithfully, Mavjitov Hamidjon
Dear Sir,

It
was announced
by local radio channel that you have a vacancy for an economist in your
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company
and I have always dreamt of working with its workers in the same place.

I am forty years
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old
and obtained a degree in economist at
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Fergana
Polytechnic Institute in 2004. I feel I have
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some
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important
qualifications that this job needs.
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I
am working as a book keeper in a joint venture for the time being.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have been working there over the past ten years. Together with
Consider adding a comma here.
it
I participate in the course on Financial Accounting for auditors which opened in our city last year. By the way, I
was awarded
with a certificate about finishing the course of “Tax and Law” which
was held
in 2002 in our Institute by the
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USAID
organization when I was a student.

I am responsible for my duty, honest and can
easily
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get
on with colleagues where I work in. Except
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it
I am
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very
cheerful and capable. The tasks are always done on time by me if they are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
by administration where I work at.
Moreover
, I can speak in two languages, such as, Russian and English. It is not matter to me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
official files in computer.

I would be happy if I could attend an interview with you and
was employed
as a worker of your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. Thank you in advance for your attention to my letter.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
,

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Mavjitov
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Hamidjon
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IELTS letter Application letter to my boss

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
252 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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