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Dear Ms Maxwell, Thank you for your email. I am happy to answer your questions. I was looking for place for the party and I saw your ads. I did some research and then I decided it was a good place for a party. I really liked it. Especially the guests waiting room. It was very comforting for the guests to wait inside in a comfortable area rather than waiting outside. And the food was really good too. Everything was fresh and the taste was excellent. My only suggestion is that the party area should be a little more spacious. No one wants to crash into something while having fun. I hope this is helpful. Kind regards, Ayse Nur Fıdan
Dear Ms Maxwell,

Thank you for your email. I am happy to answer your questions.

I was looking for place for the party and I
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research and then I decided it was a
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I
really
liked it.
Especially
the guests waiting room. It was
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very
comforting for the guests to wait inside in a comfortable area
rather
than waiting outside. And the food was
really
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good
too. Everything was fresh and the taste was excellent.

My
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only
suggestion is that the party area should be a
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little
more spacious. No one wants to crash into something while having fun. I hope this is helpful.

Kind regards,

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Ayse
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Nur
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Fıdan
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6 paragraphs
119 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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