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Write a letter to your supervisor asking for permission to attend the course. in your letter describe the training course say how it will help improve your job performance. explain how much time you need off and ask for permission.

Write a letter to your supervisor asking for permission to attend the course. in your letter describe the training course say how it will help improve your job performance. explain how much time you need off and ask for permission. ldx2D
Dear Sir/ ma'am, I want to bring to your kind notice about my recent enrollment in a new technical course that will last for one week. This course will help me grow professionally and will be needing my undue attention. to attend this course I will be needing your approval for some days off. Let me explain my situation in detail. To begin with, I have recently been given the new job role of a technical support engineer for which I need to clear my basics by attending a cloud computing course. The fact being, I am new to this course and I will be needing full concentration to understand it. this course comprises of 7 modules which will be covered in 7 days time. Furthermore, after successfully completing my course, I will be awarded a certification. while this program will boost my confidence and help me solve customer-related queries efficiently, In addition, the technical experience from the course will help me conduct online training for peers. i request you to grant me a week off so that i can attend my 9 am to 5 pm classes starting from Monday, 1st September. Thank you for your consideration. I wish to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully. Sam Smith
Dear Sir/ ma'am,

I want to bring to your kind notice about my recent enrollment in a new technical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
that will last for one week. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me grow
professionally
and will
The verb 'needing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
be needing
my undue attention.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
to
attend this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
I will
The verb 'needing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
be needing
your approval for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
days off.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
my situation in detail. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, I have recently been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
the new job role of a technical support engineer for which I need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
my basics by attending a cloud computing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. The fact being, I am new to this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
and I will
The verb 'needing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
be needing
full concentration to understand it. this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
Did you mean "comprises" or "consists of"?
comprises of
7 modules which will
be covered
in 7 days time.

Furthermore
, after
successfully
completing my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
, I will
be awarded
a certification.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
while
this program will boost my confidence and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me solve customer-related queries
efficiently
,
In addition
, the technical experience from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me conduct online training for peers.

Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
request you to grant me a week off
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that
Did you mean "I"?
i
can attend my 9 am to 5 pm classes starting from
Did you mean to refer to the current year? 1st September 2021 is not a Monday, but a Wednesday.
Monday, 1st September
.

Thank you for your consideration. I wish to hear from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
.

Sam Smith
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your supervisor asking for permission to attend the course. in your letter describe the training course say how it will help improve your job performance. explain how much time you need off and ask for permission.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
208 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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