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Dear Jane, I trust this finds you well, Kindly provide me with information about the admission requirement for the water engineering MSc. program. Furthermore, please inform me about my opportunities to acquire acceptance to study this program as per the below information and the attached documents. My field of study was agricultural engineering and the average score in the university was around 60% as per the attached academic certificate degree and the transcript, while I have over 13 years of experience as an irrigation systems design engineer as per the attached C. V. Moreover, I achieved the required score per the attached IELTS certificate. Kindly check my attached resume for additional information about my experience. I could be reached anytime via email at mohamedelhamwy@gmail. com or my cell phone at +966545119910. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely, M. Elhamwy
Dear Jane,

I trust this finds you well,

Kindly provide me with information about the admission requirement for the water engineering
Consider using a more common abbreviation of this university degree.
MSc.
program.

Furthermore
,
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please
inform me about my opportunities to acquire acceptance to study this program as per the below information and the
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attached
documents.

My field of study was agricultural engineering and the average score in the university was around 60% as per the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
attached
academic certificate degree and the transcript, while I have over 13 years of experience as an irrigation systems design engineer as per the
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attached
C. V.

Moreover
, I achieved the required score per the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
attached
IELTS certificate.

Kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
my
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attached
resume for additional information about my experience.

I could
be reached
anytime via email at
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mohamedelhamwy@gmail
.
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com
or my cell phone at +966545119910.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Sincerely
,

M.
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Elhamwy

IELTS letter email for asking questions

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  American English
11 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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