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To enterence to work application

To enterence to work application 7WpEX

Dear sir. I am writing to apply for a job as shop assissent at your supermarket and which I saw advertised today's edition Daily News newspaper. I am thirty four years old but I had never worked as a shop assissent any where before I was confidently say that I can handle this trade. I am sociable, responsible and I can get on well with a new people easily. But I think my ability in sales is good enough. I enjoy severel outdoors activities such as pkaying golf and swimming. If you would like me to attend an interview, I would be able to come at any time convinent to you as I do want to be a member of your team. I looked forward to hearing from you soon. Your fsithfully. Yuldasheva Gavhar

Dear sir. I am writing to apply for a job as shop Possible spelling mistake found.assistantassessment
assissent
 at your supermarket and which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 advertised This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
's edition Daily News newspaper. I am This word is normally spelled with hyphen.thirty-four
thirty four
 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I had never worked as a shop Possible spelling mistake found.assistantassessment
assissent
Did you mean "anywhere"?anywhere
any where
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 I was confidently
 say that I can handle this trade. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am sociable, responsible and I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 on well with a new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
easily
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 my ability in sales is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
. I enjoy Possible spelling mistake found.severalsevereseverelyseveredseverersevere l
severel
 outdoors activities such as Possible spelling mistake found.playingpayingprayingokaying
pkaying
 golf and swimming. If you Consider removing 'would'. (Usually, 'would' does not occur in a conditional clause, unless to make a request or give a polite order.)liked
would like
 me to attend an interview, I would be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 at any time Possible spelling mistake found.continentContinent
convinent
 to you as I do want to be a member of your team. I looked forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Your Possible spelling mistake found.faithfully
fsithfully
. Possible spelling mistake found.
Yuldasheva
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