Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

write a letter to the parents for look after their six-old child

write a letter to the parents for look after their six-old child MwDk6

Hi: Miss and Mr SmiteMy name is Solmaz. I’ m35 years old. I ‘m a singel. I don’t have any child. I am a teacher. I’m working in school. I have been working in the elementary school since 10 years. I graduated in university sociology. I love my job because I feel calm next to them. In my opinion that to work with children is very enjoyable. You ask with me why me would like the job? I must say that i wish go to Australia so I don’t have enough many and now this is a good opportunity. I have knowledge about take care a child special 3- 7 age child. If you agree with me. I come to Australian and in the free time so i can visit everywhere in Australia such as the park the museum and communicate to another people and In fact it is for me kind of adventure. I send you all of my certificate and experience about my employ. I will be that know what are your opinion about me? by regardSolmaz

Hi: Miss and Mr Possible spelling mistake found.SmileySmithySmiteSmites
SmiteMy
 name is Possible spelling mistake found.SolarSelmaHolmanPOLMARSOMASalman
Solmaz
. I’ m35 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. I ‘m a Possible spelling mistake found.singlesingerSingersingesingedsinges
singel
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 don’t have any child. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am a teacher. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’m working in school. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have been working in the elementary school Did you mean "for"? ('since' refers to a point in time, whereas 'for' refers to a period)for
since
 10 years. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
The verb 'to graduate' requires the preposition 'from': "graduated from".graduated from
graduated
 in university sociology. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 my job This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I feel calm next
 to them. In my opinion that to work with children is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 enjoyable. You ask with me why me would like the job? I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 say that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 wish go to Australia This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I don’t have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 this is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 opportunity. I have knowledge about take care a child special Consider using an n-dash (half dash), if you want to indicate numerical ranges or time ranges.3 – 73–7
3- 7
 age child. If you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with me. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to Australian and in the free time This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Did you mean "I"?I
i
 can visit everywhere in Australia such as the park the museum and communicate to another This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and In fact it is for me kind of adventure. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 you all of my certificate and experience about my employ. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 will be that know what are your opinion about me?  This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBy
by
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphregardSolmaz.regardSolmaz!regardSolmaz?regardSolmaz:regardSolmaz,regardSolmaz;
regardSolmaz