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suggest ways to improve the reception area in your company

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Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to draw your attention to the problems that our company’s reception area has, which have led to some drawbacks. Please allow me to elaborate on the situation. As you know, our company has been critisized because of its welcome area issues. Not only does it have insufficient seats for customers waiting for their turns, but it also has a hot temperature during the summer season. Consequently, the clients feel uncomfortably uncomfortable during their presence. The reasons that make reception one of the essential areas in the company are uncountable. First of all, it is the place where you greet your clients for the first time. Additionally, it plays a crucial role in leaving a good impression on your customers and business partners. To tackle this issue, if this place is designed properly, it will reinforce a positive image of your brand. Beside supplying more couches that are comfortable for all ages, we could support the area with an air conditioning system to make the welcoming atmosphere smother. If you would like to discuss this matter further, please do not hesitate to call me. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards,

Dear Mr. Smith,

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company
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area
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some
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allow
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good
 impression on your customers and business partners.

To tackle this issue, if this place is designed
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, it will reinforce a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
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area
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make
 the welcoming atmosphere smother.

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please
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soon
.

Best regards, 