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Giving advise letter you should giving advise to go to collage or to try to get a job.

Giving advise letter you should giving advise to go to collage or to try to get a job. J35Wa
Dear my friendHope you are doing great and thank you for writing to me. You have asked for my advise regarding the next step you should take-either to join a collage or alternatively get a job. I would suggest that you should gain some work experience before pursuing higher education. I joined university just after fishing high school and consequently, I could not get any job experience in my firld which I often regret. I believe you should not make the same mistake and instead take the opportunity to gain some valuable skills such as delegating tasks, managing time, meeting deadlines and working in a team. The job experience will enhance your decision-making and presentation skills. Moreover, it will open doors for better job opportunities in the future I hope my suggestion would help you decide what is best for you. The best wishes your best friend Abdufattoh Abduhakimov.
Dear my
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friendHope
you are doing great and thank you for writing to me. You have
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asked for
my
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advise
regarding the
next
step you should take-either to
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join
a collage or
alternatively
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get
a
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job
. I would suggest that you should gain
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some
work experience
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before
pursuing higher education. I
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joined
university
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just
after fishing high school and
consequently
, I could not
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get
any
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job
experience in my
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firld
which I
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often
regret.
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I
believe you should not
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make
the same mistake and
instead
take the opportunity to gain
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some
valuable
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skills
such as delegating tasks, managing time, meeting deadlines and working in a team. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
experience will enhance your decision-making and presentation
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.
Moreover
, it will open doors for better
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
opportunities in the future I hope my suggestion would
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help
you decide what is best for you. The best wishes your best friend
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Abdufattoh
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Abduhakimov
.
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IELTS letter Giving advise letter you should giving advise to go to collage or to try to get a job.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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