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Give some advices your friend to know some informations about a college which is situated near he live

Give some advices your friend to know some informations about a college which is situated near he live QVyby

Dear CarolHow are you Carol? Are your wife and sons well? I am and my family is very well and now the weather is windy but pleasant. Nowadays I am very busy with my works and I am so sorry I do not write to you for a long time. Now I need some datas about Thomson's college which situated near you live. I would be greatful if you could offer your advice. I am going to study this college if you advice me. How it costs? Are you give me some informations about this college's educational system? If I enter this college, is this college provide appartment to me and my family? Please let me what you think I should do. Best wishes Simona Addison

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 about this college's educational system? If I enter this college, is this college provide Possible spelling mistake found.apartment
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 I should do. Best wishes Simona Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphAddison.Addison!Addison?Addison:Addison,Addison;
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