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Give some advices your friend to know some informations about a college which is situated near he live

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Dear CarolHow are you Carol? Are your wife and sons well? I am and my family is very well and now the weather is windy but pleasant. Nowadays I am very busy with my works and I am so sorry I do not write to you for a long time. Now I need some datas about Thomson's college which situated near you live. I would be greatful if you could offer your advice. I am going to study this college if you advice me. How it costs? Are you give me some informations about this college's educational system? If I enter this college, is this college provide appartment to me and my family? Please let me what you think I should do. Best wishes Simona Addison

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IELTS letter Give some advices your friend to know some informations about a college which is situated near he live

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

125 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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