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you recently used a taxi and left some important documents there

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in regards to a recent journey I made from Hon Gai to Bai Chay on 20th July 2021, specifically, starting from 4am and finishing 30 minutes later. Immediately, after entering the taxi you manage, I started reviewing some important documents containing clients' information. However, when I reached home, I found that I had left these inside the cab. These papers are very significant due to the fact that it has our employees' information, and if they fall into the wrong hands, there could be profoundly serious implications for myself. I would suggest you to call the driver of this vehicle and make arrangements to locate it. I expect you would return lost documents as early as I find it. I am hopeful that we can reach an agreement regarding my case. Yours faithfully, Vera
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
a recent journey I made from Hon
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Gai
to
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Bai
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Chay
on 20th July 2021,
specifically
, starting from 4am and finishing 30 minutes later.

Immediately, after entering the taxi you manage, I
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started
reviewing
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some
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important
documents containing clients' information.
However
, when I reached home, I found that I had
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left
these inside the cab.

These papers are
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very
significant due to the fact that it has our employees' information, and if they fall into the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
hands, there could be
profoundly
serious implications for myself.

I would suggest you to call the driver of this vehicle and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
arrangements to locate it. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
you would return lost documents as early as I find it.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am hopeful that we can reach an agreement regarding my case.

Yours
faithfully
,

Vera

IELTS letter you recently used a taxi and left some important documents there

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
140 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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