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Your friend asked you to teach his son English. You need to borrow some English books from your teacher. Write a letter to your teacher requesting these materials. In your letter you should share: Details about the child, What type of books you need? When and where you are going to teach this child?

Your friend asked you to teach his son English. You need to borrow some English books from your teacher. Write a letter to your teacher requesting these materials. In your letter you should share: Details about the child, What type of books you need? When and where you are going to teach this child? OrnPM

Dear Mr. Sharma, I am writing this letter to seek your permission for borrowing some of your books. I will be needing them because on of my close friend, Ritesh Patel, has requested me to teach PCM (Physics, Chemistry, Maths) subjects to his son. He is currently studying in 11th standard in M. N. N. Higher Secondary School, Navsari. I know this child personally, and I know his potential. As I don't have these books with me, I would be thankful to you if you can provide arrange these PCM books for me. Moreover, if you have any latest material for 11th standard students, then I would also like to borrow them. I will start this boy's tution classes from next Monday. I have not yet finalized any venue for this classes. But, mostly I will arrange them at my home as it already has other required essentials. Hope you will be able to provide this books soon. Yours sincerely, Vijay Patel

Dear Mr. Sharma,

I am writing this letter to seek your permission for borrowing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of your books.

I will The verb 'needing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
be needing
 them This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 on of my close friend, Possible spelling mistake found.RitesRite shRites hNitesh
Ritesh
 Patel, has requested me to teach PCM (Physics, Chemistry, Possible spelling mistake. 'Maths' is British English.Math
Maths
) subjects to his son. He is currently
 studying in 11th standard in M. N. N. Higher Secondary School, Possible spelling mistake found.NavalNASANASCARBavariaCaesarNasal
Navsari
. I know this child personally
, and I know his potential.

As I don't have these books with me, I would be thankful to you if you can provide arrange these PCM books for me. Moreover
, if you have any latest material for 11th standard students, then I would also
 like to borrow them.

I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 this boy's Possible spelling mistake found.tuitiontut ion
tution
 classes from next
 Monday. I have not yet
 finalized any venue for Did you mean "these"?these
this
 classes. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, mostly
 I will arrange them at my home as it already has other required essentials.

Hope you will be able to provide this books This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours sincerely
, Vijay Patel