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FRIEND OF YOURS IS THINKING TO GOING ON CAMPING HOLIDAY, ASKING ADVICE

FRIEND OF YOURS IS THINKING TO GOING ON CAMPING HOLIDAY, ASKING ADVICE 2ReX6

Dear Liza, I'm writing you to giving some advice of your camping plan. You will be going to camp first time, thats why you should be very excited. I decided to give you some suggestions for your comfort. Camping holiday is not like hotel holiday. You will be free on your planning your time. For instance, you dont need to wait for breakfast time or dinner time as a hotel holiday. Whenever you are hungry you will be able to prepare your meal. And also whereever you want to go you can easily set up your tent. If there is a peoples has a to many childrens around you, you can move to another location quickly. Therefore, camping life is more relaxing and enjoyable than the others. Moreover, its cheapest choise also. On the other hand, I want to explain some negative sides of camping holiday. At nights you can feel cold and you can scare from wild animals around your tent. However, safety is depends on your tents materials quality. And if you are not in camping area, its hard to find some water to taking shower. This issue bringings hygiene problems. I am confident, you would like to join the group that you feel familiar. Me and my friends planning to go camping area at south of the Italy. But you ought to decide for this organisation until next week. I look forward to get your answer. Best regards, Meray Tutlu

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